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Enchanted Trails (Commercial BxG Fantasy) W.I.P.

Posted: Sat Nov 23, 2019 10:48 am
by katie_writes
Hi everyone! :)
I would like to present you the first little teaser of my W.I.P.!
I will post updates soon and if you have any questions, feel free to ask anything!

Title:
Enchanted Trails

Genre:
fantasy, mystery, romance

Planned word count:
around 100k

Number of routes:
3 (together with the true ending)
1 secret ending (in special edition of the game)

Main plot:
Nola, a 18 years old shepherd was always an outcast in the town of Blattea. As a baby, she was chosen to be sacrifised and send to the Eastern Forest, but her parents refused this. Since that, many of the townspeople blame her and her family, if any misfortune happens.
Nola was always careful to not go to the Forest, but when one of her sheep goes missing, she has no other chance.
But what will wait her between the ancient trees? Will she survive in the infamous forest?

Main characters:

Nola (it can be changed, to another name, which you choose): the main character. She is 18 years old and a shepherd in Blattea.

Jaden: the fiancee of Nola. He is a 19 years old hunter from Blattea.

Landon: one of the inhabitants of the Forest. He helps Nola, and seems to know a lot about the girl. The question is, if Nola can really trust him and why does he help Nola.

Stella: the friend of Nola. She is a fellow shepherd from Blattea.

"Enchanted Trails

Prologue

The last rays of the sun vanished and everything became dark.
The girl walked faster.
Just a little more.
Almost there.
She already saw the lights of Blattea.
A few more meters and she will be out from the forest and the gatekeepers will let her in to the town.
She was on the edge of the forest, next to the last bushes, when she heard the noise.
Steps.
Someone was behind her.
Someone was following her.

The girl froze. Even the birds stopped chirping, everything became deadly quiet.
Suddenly she heard the soft whisper. Her name.
She almost sighed out calmed, it has to be one of the hunters from the town.

She heard the steps now from closer, but waited patiently.
One step.
Two.
Another two.

The girl's eyes widened terrified, when she felt the cold breath. The long, sharp claws touched her face almost gently. Her mouth shivered from fear, she needed all of her strength, to not cry.
Maybe it is really just a hunter, or another shepherd, who is playing a prank on her. It has to be…
She turned with a forced smile.
And started to scream."

Re: Enchanted Trails (Commercial BxG Fantasy) W.I.P.

Posted: Sat Nov 23, 2019 1:34 pm
by fleet
The plot sounds interesting and I like the artwork. I wish you success in making and selling this.

Re: Enchanted Trails (Commercial BxG Fantasy) W.I.P.

Posted: Mon Nov 25, 2019 11:18 am
by katie_writes
Thank you! I am glad, that you find it interesting and thank you for telling what you think! 😊
The artwork is from Pixabay, both the characters and the backgrounds, but everything written is my creation. Soon I will post some screenshots from the game too. 😊