Hi I have downloaded your game and I think you should present text as they are typed by a person. It looks better that way. So to this, you have to open game/options.rpy
Then edit this line as:
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default preferences.text_cps = 99.0
I have trouble porting to Android too, in my linux system. I finally had to give up and used Windows os with Java 8 installed to port it to android. I will help you if you need it. Just private message me about it.
I think when the main character finally stops from the bike you should change the scene to show the site of the accident.
The owls flying were awesome! I didn't know how you manage to do it but I like to learn
The layout of the text box looks so cool with the owls on the each side!!!
The owls shown in the scene carrying a dead rat is great !!!
The relation between the owl eating the rat and man dying was great. But I first got confused whether the rat was eating the man or the rat.
The radio host part is amazing ! I wonder how you printed text like that out of the text box. Although the color are too bright and need more contrast between the text and background.
I think it would be better to add music to radio scene.
The girl in the stage is beautiful !
This seems like a wonderful game!
