My first impression of the game was: Oh cool, it's a mystery game and it has so nice arts... Hopefully it is good!
AND it was sooooo much fun to play the demo!!
I thought that it might disappoint me, but no it was not!! The story and art are amazing! Really, you could think that it is a commercial game.
The dialouges with the different personalities are so amusing and very refreshing. I'm relieved that the heroine is NOT a boring doormat, in your game she can be a great personality!
Gen is such a cuuuute "brat".
He's quite mean to the heroine! But in a good way I guess. Hehe.
But the conversations with the confident personality of Kyoko is hilarious. The bickering is just too much for me. I laughed so hard at some parts. One of the best parts: Kyoko:
"You..! You.. You kappa!!" And that blush! *faint* I really hope that he will be a nice tsundere. ^^
Ryuunosuke or short Ryuu might be the mysterious and cold on the exterior guy. Normally I'm biased towards those mysterious guys, but maybe he's too serious at the moment. I guess I'll fall for him, if the opens up.
Oh Minoru... don't be such a flirt!
His jokes are always bad to no end, so bad, that they are actually funny!! He might be flirty and so on, but he's likely to have a badass side somewhere deep inside him, while showing off.
Maybe it's just my imagination, but...
shouldn't the MC be more curious about what happened to her father? Like what he was doing in the Onigame House and how he died? It doesn't feel right, that she is not questioning those things...
I mean she is surrounded by bishies, I understand that, but still... ^^Seems like he was killed by the Onigamis though, since Gen pointed this out...
It's so mean to leave us with this open ending in chapter 1.
I actually was frightened by that shadow, even though I knew that something was coming.
Oh, a funny idea of continuation of chapter 1 if it was a comedy:
It turns out, that Minoru was peeping on Kyoko. He tries to cover her mouth before she screams saying: "Please don't scream, I was just peep... ah no, I mean... I was just watching over you since it's dangerous... And now let me hide in your room before Ryuu kills me!!"
I think the mystery factor will make this game very interesting, since the game does not consist of only "dating" a character but also the difficulty of solving the mystery or mysteries.
The game so far was very enjoyable. You did a really good job! Please continue with your work! Your fan's are patiently waiting for the final release of your game.