Five (down for revision)

[Khadrian]

The demo is currently down for revision. With a couple scenes to be rewritten, and a little bit of reworking to do here and there, it will be brought back once we have some stand-in sprites and backgrounds in place. Please look forward to it.

[gekiganwing]

I downloaded your demo a while ago, but it took until Sunday before I had the time to read it, and it took another day before I had time to reply. In other words, this feedback is overdue...

You managed to transition pretty well from upbeat slice-of-life into a supernatural story. I'm now wondering where the plot will go next. I assume there will be a few more conflicts before the characters get paired up. Multiple endings?

If you need more specific feedback, please say so.

[Khadrian]

Gekiganwing:
Thank you for your reply. The plot will probably tend to focus more on the supernatural side as the story progresses, and as for endings there will probably be at least one for every "obtainable" character, as well as a couple others. There's actually a character that doesn't get introduced in the current demo. I actually plan to release another version, when I get the script a little more polished, that will include the whole first chapter, and at the same time open a Work in Progress thread with more information on the story and characters. Maybe even character sketches.

Also, as it's in no way under-appreciated, thank you very much for tossing the word 'supernatural' to me. I was trying to think of it and couldn't. Thanks to that I can now add it in as the genre.

[Khadrian]

New version up now! Still no art assets though I'm sorry, I'm soory OTL. There's also a WiP thread in the "ideas" section now if you haven't already seen it, there's a link to it in the OP. I'm sorry about the bareness the WiP has... I'm currently in the middle of reworking it. Well that's it for now, Happy New Year!