Toire No Hanako (beta version)

[DerWanderer]

Playing right now, loving it so far <33333
there's a bit mistake in the grammar:
"Why you cannot go into the toilet alone"
Supposed to be "Why can't you go to the toilet alone?"

Anyway, the 3D art is awesome! How exactly did you do it? :O I have 0 knowledge in 3D art and was wondering if things like you did are freely available/not...

[Donmai]

there's a bit mistake in the grammar

Hey! Come on: the author is from Brazil (not an English speaker) and the characters are supposed to be japanese (ditto).
Only kidding! The "Ingrish" text is the main reason the program is still in beta. So far three persons offered to proofread it, but no one have finished this difficult task. I understand the length of the text (not speaking of the many language monstrosities ) is really a challenge, so I can only wait.

For now TNH is a sort of OELVN with a heavy foreign accent...

Thank you for playing!

[WeAreMuesli]

Downloading right now, "mixed-media" visual style looks pretty peculiar so we'll go for it, thanx!

[Donmai]

Wow! Surely would like to hear your comments!

[philip]

@Donmai

I first found this story back in April, and stayed up most of the night playing through it. For some reason I went back to it this evening, and played through it again. I enjoyed it just as much as, if not more than, the first time through, and I echo once again the enthusiastic comments that I made about your wonderful creation in my earlier April post!

[Donmai]

I thank you again, philip! Currently I'm waiting for the text editing to be finished (fingers crossed). Looking at that work again (that was my first attempt at creating a VN and my first steps with Ren'Py) I see many things I could have done differently, but they are all in the programming and graphics editing work. I'm happy that you found the results to be good, as I am sure I have so much to improve in future works.