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Double Edge [super cross platform VN]

Posted: Sun Mar 03, 2013 4:05 am
by muggy8
So I posted the game in the Work In Progress section under the Player's pavilion but apparently no one has given my any actual feedback so I thought might as well repost it here.

http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 43&t=19666

So that's the post that I made.

So the game is made in JavaScript which is a cross platform web based scripting language. Because of that the game is playable in a web browser which means any mobile device that can access the internet is able to play the game as all web browsers support JavaScript and HTML. As far as the technical details go, I'm updating the Game Save function a bit and any and all help associated with AJAX will be very much appreciated.

The demo of the game is fully functional (game saving is included). Feel free to take a look. You can also take a look at some of the game assets such as BGs and BGMs which is probably my favorite part of the game engine. Give the game a shot on different devices see what you get. I know for a fact that the game engine doesn't work Opera in any browser but it is mostly functional on everything else that i've tried.

Demo game: http://my.j-omni.tk/

Re: Double Edge [super cross platform VN]

Posted: Sun Mar 03, 2013 4:35 am
by AxemRed
- Visible music player looks unprofessional.
- Line-by-line visible loading of images looks bad.
- VN area is scrollable on Chrome(Android), pressing the space bar in Firefox also scrolls it out of view.
- Opening menu is misaligned.
- Text is misaligned by a few pixels on Chrome(Android)
- Missing keyboard support, skip functionality, textlog/backlog or auto read.
- No way to resize the VN area (one might want to read it fullscreen)
- Why the hell is the save function prompting for an email?
- Text rewraps as it appears.
- Branch reloads the page and resets the text speed.

The other 8 or so Javascript VN engines I know of are better.

Re: Double Edge [super cross platform VN]

Posted: Sun Mar 03, 2013 7:21 am
by muggy8
Oh snap there's other JS based VNs O_O link me like now XD i dont wanna do coding anymore T_T

Re: Double Edge [super cross platform VN]

Posted: Sun Mar 03, 2013 7:27 am
by AxemRed

Re: Double Edge [super cross platform VN]

Posted: Sun Mar 03, 2013 7:39 am
by muggy8
OH SNAP!!! dat webstory engine looks pretty darn awesome O_O i'm so gonna use it XD thanks :)

Re: Double Edge [super cross platform VN]

Posted: Tue Mar 05, 2013 9:11 pm
by muggy8
Ok it looks like i wasn't actually able to use WebStories VN engine for some reason. However I will get around to fixing these bugs :) for starters i fixed the problem with scrolling off the screen. now it wont have that problem anymore (minor CSS problem) i'll get around to fixing the other things. the e-mail prompt is there to say because of various background stuff. basically everyone's email is unique and that's why i'm using it.