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Completed Game: http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 11&t=27545

I'm a Ren'Py newbie and a noob at game creating. But I put my heart and soul my first game, it's a simple free otome game without complex storyplots or branching...It may not have great Cg but hope you'll like it. ^_^

In the story, Midori Aichi is an ordinary girl who had a crush on Saito sempai...then the story plots of the VN varies depends on what kind of route you have, you might expereince tangled love triangle, or romance comedy with tsundere sempai....

The design of the character Midori is based on Homura...
I love Homura's uniform nyan~~
but I add many cuteness and 'chibiness" to Midori~~



Male Characters
Kou:

Saito:


Some Screenshots ^_^:
Please give me advices and your opinions on the game before I release the final version.
It's okay to give out harsh critiques,so feel free to speak out your mind.It would help me to improve this game.
*bow*

*shy and nervous* >.<

Download:

Win x 86: Mac: Linux:

Short, simple, sweet and cute. Overwhelmingly cuter. I really like Kou's character alot. My only recommendation is for you to use a different mic because the clicking at the end of every line gets to me a bit.

IchigoRice wrote:Short, simple, sweet and cute. Overwhelmingly cuter. I really like Kou's character alot. My only recommendation is for you to use a different mic because the clicking at the end of every line gets to me a bit.

^_^ Thank you for taking your time beta testing my game. I'll make change to mic. I'm really happy that you like my game.
^_^

Some routes are longer while other routes are shorter.


...Can I ask what ending you got nyan? *can't controll my curiosity..>.<*

So far I have played it only one time (and got an "iris flower" ending). Your game is well done, simple and very good-looking.
Some things I have noticed:

• -The pink letters of the main character's name many times are hard to read against the dialogue box background;
  -(I'm not really a good help here, as I'm not an English native speaker, but...) At the start of the second episode the word 'Saturday' was reading 'Saturaday';
  -At the start of the third episode there was a missing image (MTgwMTlwNDI2ODA not found).

Is it really your first game? Congratulations.

Donmai wrote:So far I have played it only one time (and got an "iris flower" ending). Your game is well done, simple and very good-looking.
Some things I have noticed:

• -The pink letters of the main character's name many times are hard to read against the dialogue box background;
  -(I'm not really a good help here, as I'm not an English native speaker, but...) At the start of the second episode the word 'Saturday' was reading 'Saturaday';
  -At the start of the third episode there was a missing image (MTgwMTlwNDI2ODA not found).

Is it really your first game? Congratulations.

Thank you so much for beta testing my game.
I fixed the spelling error in my script and looked into the missing image problem, turned out that is because I forgot to put ".jpg" when I define my image hahah. ^_^ Thank you so much for pointing that out.

And I also changed the color of Midori's name into darker permenant rose + red.

And thank you again for pointing out the problems. ^_^

I also updated the download files on the thread, because I don't want any other playrs to encounter the missing image problem.

^_^

Very sweet, I feel innocent again when I'm playing this (LOL). Anywho I noticed that Saito at the gym, when he was zoomed there was still white stuff around him so not neatly cropped. You have a very cute voice if that was your voice in the game anyway, although I'll be honest there was a moment, when midori was humming...it was...creepy for some reason, that's just my opinion though.

Overall a good game. Look forward if you decided to make more.

Xerofit51 wrote:Very sweet, I feel innocent again when I'm playing this (LOL). Anywho I noticed that Saito at the gym, when he was zoomed there was still white stuff around him so not neatly cropped. You have a very cute voice if that was your voice in the game anyway, although I'll be honest there was a moment, when midori was humming...it was...creepy for some reason, that's just my opinion though.

Overall a good game. Look forward if you decided to make more.

^_^ Thanks you for your compliment and encouragement ~~~ And thank you so much for pointing out the problem.
I'll make changes to it and fix the problems. ^_^
And thank you so much for spending your time beta testing my game~~~