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So I had been challenged to make a KN based off a picture of a girl in a library and I ended up with... this.

This is the story of Mohanad and Kim, two volunteers at a local library, who will or won't become friends.

The story is complete but the sprites and backgrounds are all placeholders. I'm looking for feedback on the story mostly, and advice to improve it if any.




Credits:
Made with Ren'Py 6.17.6
Story, Programming: Roz
Editor: ReikaAoyama
Sprites: Tokudaya
Backgrounds: Uncle Mugen, pppantsu
Music: Syncopika, Kevin MacLeod
Sound Effects: SoundBible

Ooooh, so this is that project. Haha. I can't wait for the original art! I know it's gonna be awesome again~

Downloading right now! I'll give you my feedback once I finish playing. Hahaha.

@Ran08

I know I told you this on Skype, but thanks for the feedback! I'm going to revamp the story and make it longer and hopefully better haha