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@SinSisters
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SinSisters wrote:I really enjoyed the artwork! The character sprites are very nice
The GUI is quite pleasing to look at
Neat concept!
Thanks!
SinSisters wrote:Transitions are a little startling (the slide or wipe transition, I suppose it's called...), consider something more natural
I thought the slide transitions would make things a little more interesting, to give the feeling of "walking / running", but if they're too distracting then I'll change them.
SinSisters wrote:Also whatever font is being used means that I can't give Anna the cute little <3 heart like I wanted *sigh* Not really a problem, just noticed it and thought it was weird. Is that a UK keyboard thing?
Nah, it's the font. I never thought the '<' and '>' characters would be something else. Will change!
SinSisters wrote:It seems unnatural for when I gave Anna a cute little comment and the highest possible rating that she says "Oh, so I did an okay job?" and he says "To be honest it wasn't the best" dude I gave her the highest possible, why you no praise?! I understand that you have to write a decent length comment, but if I were a waitress and I got all 10s and best recommendation, I wouldn't really care that much what the comment says.
Looks like I have to change how the game calculates the comments! Sounds like you've should've gotten the best reaction, as opposed to the middle reaction.
Comments don't have to be long, it could be just one word, like "cute", "charming", or whatever.
SinSisters wrote:You should have an option to 'wipe' the screen, we can see the background! I know that we can press 1st and 2nd mouse button at the same time, but it's easier if we can just press a button so we don't mess up (heheh, talking from experience)
Not sure what you mean, you mean removing the text box so you can see the sprite and BG? Or removing the sprite and text box so you can just see the BG?
SinSisters wrote:Hopefully you find this feedback helpful! It's a very cute game
Thanks! Will consider your suggestions.
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@sasquatchii
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sasquatchii wrote:Wow, fantastic job with this game!! I am really looking forward to playing it once it's complete!
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2. The character sprites and backgrounds are great! I really loved them, everything's so cute & there's lots of detail.
Thanks!
sasquatchii wrote:1. The transitions between scenes are pretty jarring, I'm not really a fan of how they just sort of slide across the screen- it's kind of weird? I also didn't really like the side character portraits sliding in the way they do.
See second quote from SinSisters.
sasquatchii wrote:3. In the drinks menu, you can order "orange" "apple" or "grapefruit". I thought this was a little weird, wouldn't it be orange juice, apple juice, or grapefruit juice?
Yeah, but I thought it would be implied they're juices, considering they're juxtaposed with images. I guess I should be more clear.
sasquatchii wrote:4. One thing that bothered me- if you order the sausage, egg, and waffles, Ryne goes on to say "Lots of protein in this meal, although I don't think one should eat this often if you have heart disease." Protein isn't bad for the heart, protein is actually very good for you & necessary in order to survive. So sausage and eggs are actually pretty healthy! The only unhealthy item would be the waffles, as they are high in carbs + sugar.
I should rewrite that then! I was thinking about the cholesterol content in the eggs and sausages.
sasquatchii wrote:5. When I went to go type in a comment on the feedback form, the form actually moved all the way too the right and then off the screen after I typed too many characters. Then I'd type some more and it'd snap back in place. I thought it was a little weird, so I've attached a screenshot to show what I mean.
Yeah, I'm aware of it. Not really sure what's causing it, will investigate.
sasquatchii wrote:6. I found Mikaela absolutely frustrating, and it takes a lot for me to feel frustrated with characters in a VN xD Although my boyfriend is a waiter so I understand her pain. Working in the food industry can be a hard & thankless job.
Yeah, Mikaela can be pretty frustrating. ^^
I've worked in the food industry a long while back and yeah, it can be hard and thankless.
sasquatchii wrote:7. I did think it was weird, that even though I gave Mikala the worst possible ratings, she called me up and acted nice and perfectly normal, odd as she was seriously such a jerk earlier! Will giving girls bad ratings affect your relationships with them in the full game?
I was considering this, but decided not to, to keep things somewhat short. Maybe in a future version, should I decide to expand on this project!