Black Sands Alpha Prologue Demo is looking for criticism
Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2015 1:12 am
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I am looking for feedback on my alpha demo. We are going to have a custom GUI in a week but I want to vet the plot a bit and see where i can make improvements.
The Demo is roughly 10 minutes. It is like a novel.
http://www.indiedb.com/games/black-sand ... ha-version
1. How do you like the writing? What can be improved?
2. Is the plot interesting?
3. Did it function well via programming?
4. How was the music?
5. Whatever else you want to say.
I am looking for feedback on my alpha demo. We are going to have a custom GUI in a week but I want to vet the plot a bit and see where i can make improvements.
The Demo is roughly 10 minutes. It is like a novel.
http://www.indiedb.com/games/black-sand ... ha-version
1. How do you like the writing? What can be improved?
2. Is the plot interesting?
3. Did it function well via programming?
4. How was the music?
5. Whatever else you want to say.