I finally took up the courage to present a work I did a year ago and to try to translate it into english.
This is where I need your help. My game was first written in french, but I'd like it to meet a larger audience. That's why I made a draft english translation. I think the text is understandable, but I always have trouble when it come to choose a verbal form (present, simple past, present perfect, etc.). Plus I might mix american and british expressions, which won't be very logic.
So I'd really like my game to be proofread by a native english speaker to point out my mistakes to me.
Game Presentation
Everything is dark. Who are you ? Where are you ? You can only see bits of images, fragments. There are also strange murmurs nearby...
This is how the game looks like : This game is a kinetic novel. It's anything but your typical VN : no choices, not event sprites or love story. It's just a strange little story, very open to your interpretation.
Download links
- Game presentation and downloads on my website : https://korova-normandie.org/pages/clair-obscur
- Direct download link : https://bitbucket.org/Korova08/clairobs ... fr-all.zip
Even if you're not in the mood for proofread, you might want to try it. Any feedback will be greatly appreciated. (And if you're French, you can try it too !)
Thanks for your attention !