seeking feedback for otome visual novel

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seeking feedback for otome visual novel

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I'm looking for a few people to play through my game and give me feedback on story, pacing, and such. Most of the art isn't final, and the ending without a love interest isn't programmed.

I would rate this game R or maybe PG13 ?

(sprite art done by: sexbomb viewtopic.php?f=62&t=35637)
Pinewood Island (previously Trust & Murder) is an otome/visual novel with elements of romance, horror, and mystery.
A group of students, their Professor and his T.A. arrive on a secluded island for a 4 week long science program. The plan is to study the natural flora on the island while earning double the credit.

This is interrupted when the Professor is killed after an impromptu beach party. When they try to call for help they find that the phones do not work. There is no boat, and no way to contact the mainland.

A charter boat isn't set to arrive for them until the 4 weeks are over.

You must decide where to focus your energy, and who to focus it on. Mistakes can be deadly.

Some of the students start to crack under the pressure. Try to survive and solve the murder while potentially indulging in romance.
Please message me and I'll give you a link to the download.
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