Aether Skies DEMO Page [Drama] [Dark Fantasy]

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Aether Skies DEMO Page [Drama] [Dark Fantasy]

#1 Post by wyverngem »

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The Exalt of Idwall once dedicated her life to the study of Aether, but now has more pressing matters; a mutilated king, a throne that was never meant to be hers, and a man who is the last of his kind. Her story was burned to ash and the pages are all but smeared across lies and rumors. Yet, I still remember.


The demo is about 7,600 words and takes you through the first chapter. Once you've complete the demo you unlock the demo content which includes stats of your game as well as a Survey.

The demo ends just at the start of Chapter 2, if you don't become a stain on the wall...

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Added Questions:
What did you like about the demo?
What could be improved on?
Were you able to finish the demo?
Did you complete chapter 1? (No spoilers)
Did you come across any bugs or errors that caused Renpy to crash?
Is there anything you would change or modify?
Would have you preferred a longer demo?
If you happened to find spelling/grammar issues please pm me with suggestions. ^_^ I'm only human and am thankful to know.
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Re: Aether Skies DEMO Page [Drama] [Dark Fantasy]

#2 Post by SupersizeMyHeart »

Such a cool game! The art is fantastic, everything is really sleek and cool. Have to go to work now, but soon as I get back I'll finish the demo! Can't wait for the finished product.
Hey, I'm making a game about kissing cute fast food mascots! Check it out here right here.

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#3 Post by wyverngem »

PassiveChicken wrote:Such a cool game! The art is fantastic, everything is really sleek and cool. Have to go to work now, but soon as I get back I'll finish the demo! Can't wait for the finished product.
Thank you! ^_^ That really made my day. I hope it goes well.


Also I added questions:
What did you like about the demo?
What could be improved on?
Were you able to finish the demo?
Did you complete chapter 1? (No spoilers)
Did you come across any bugs or errors that caused Renpy to crash?
Is there anything you would change or modify?
Would have you preferred a longer demo?
If you happened to find spelling/grammar issues please pm me with suggestions. ^_^ I'm only human and am thankful to know.

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Re: Aether Skies DEMO Page [Drama] [Dark Fantasy]

#4 Post by nancie »

I played through the demo a few times. I remember looking at the wip a while ago. What you have so far looks very promising, I can't wait for the finished version.
What did you like about the demo?
Very nice, I really appreciated the bonus content as well. The art and story are both well presented
What could be improved on?
I like what you have so far, cant wait to see more content.
Were you able to finish the demo?
Yes
Did you complete chapter 1? (No spoilers)
On my 4th try.
Did you come across any bugs or errors that caused Renpy to crash?
No
Is there anything you would change or modify?
The demo asked me for money, (Pay what you want) while I would normally support this sort of thing asking for money on a 1 chapter demo seems a bit presumptuous. I think what you have is totally worthy of a commercial gamer and I would buy it or help with a kickstarter, but not asking on a demo. Just my two cents anyway.
Would have you preferred a longer demo?
Maybe, but again the presentation of what you have was great.

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Re: Aether Skies DEMO Page [Drama] [Dark Fantasy]

#5 Post by wyverngem »

nancie wrote:
I played through the demo a few times. I remember looking at the wip a while ago. What you have so far looks very promising, I can't wait for the finished version.
What did you like about the demo?
Very nice, I really appreciated the bonus content as well. The art and story are both well presented
What could be improved on?
I like what you have so far, cant wait to see more content.
Were you able to finish the demo?
Yes
Did you complete chapter 1? (No spoilers)
On my 4th try.
Did you come across any bugs or errors that caused Renpy to crash?
No
Is there anything you would change or modify?
The demo asked me for money, (Pay what you want) while I would normally support this sort of thing asking for money on a 1 chapter demo seems a bit presumptuous. I think what you have is totally worthy of a commercial gamer and I would buy it or help with a kickstarter, but not asking on a demo. Just my two cents anyway.
Would have you preferred a longer demo?
Maybe, but again the presentation of what you have was great.
Thank you for your feedback nanice! ^_^ I don't expect anything for PWYW and I'll be taking it down on the demo when the full game is released. I know a few who've done crowdfunding, but it's not something I'm comfortable with.

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