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https://www.dropbox.com/s/bujf1vvj99hpy ... c.zip?dl=0
Alright so here it is. A revamped demo for a project that's been on hiatus for a long time. I finally decided I wanted to do this so I downloaded renpy and learned how to make my own bgs. Anyways, the demo contains the first day of the common route. Sorry this isn't the best looking thread. I'm not familiar with posting on here that much. Any feedback would be welcomed!
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I was taken off guard a little bit.
I enjoyed the fun antics, the protagonist's thoughts, and the serious ending, I'm just saying that switching between them felt too fast for me.
Despite my qualms with the scene transitions, though, you did a good job pacing things. The scenes went by at natural-feeling paces without going by too quickly or too slowly.
Sorry that I'm the first one commenting, by the way. The Demos and Beta Testing forum seems pretty quiet from what I've seen.
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