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PostPosted: Mon Mar 13, 2017 2:02 pm 
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ETA: probably going to add any other BGs I'm experimenting with on this thread, feel free to leave any feedback so I can get better!

new BG! I'm trying to move beyond photo manipulation and start drawing BGs (though I did use a photo to sketch out the rough Lines... Tell me what you think? Still a lot of room for improvement obviously > <

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 15, 2017 11:43 am 
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Another one I'd love feedback on: (This one I just did line art over the image, and then applied a few filters to the original photo)

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 15, 2017 12:04 pm 
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With the first one, the black lines are a bit thick and the side-building's roofs seem off. A bit too basic and the line's perspective is off. Do you know of the horizon points technique? The other one does look nice. It looks like a 3D rendered image rather than a picture, though I think with this technique that it'll be much more difficult to make multiple bgs in the same style because the photos will have to be similarily colored etc..

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 15, 2017 1:44 pm 
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Mammon wrote:
With the first one, the black lines are a bit thick and the side-building's roofs seem off. A bit too basic and the line's perspective is off. Do you know of the horizon points technique? The other one does look nice. It looks like a 3D rendered image rather than a picture, though I think with this technique that it'll be much more difficult to make multiple bgs in the same style because the photos will have to be similarily colored etc..


well I can adjust the colors in photoshop or just paint the line art lol but yeah, it'll be slightly different. I've seen the horizon points but I'm using actual photos as references so I'm basing it more on those. I'll look into it more though. I'm working on another one now, I'll see if I can match it to the first one > <

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Hi - I can probably critique better with a paint-over if you would be interested in that?

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 20, 2017 1:56 pm 
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Hi - I can probably critique better with a paint-over if you would be interested in that?


feel free, if you'd like. I need to post the next one I did eventually > <

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