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by DeeKay » Tue Oct 02, 2012 2:57 pm
OokamiKasumi wrote:What? Why...?! I thought you liked spooky things?
Well... not
this type of spooky ! There's something disturbing as I watch it and I can't shake it out of my mind ^^'
OokamiKasumi wrote:Carassaurat wrote:...Also, I think she'd be significantly improved by adding cat ears.
Like so?
FrenchDoll_kitty.jpg
Stay away from me !
(rofl, kinda overreacting but whatever :p)
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by OokamiKasumi » Tue Oct 02, 2012 3:55 pm
DeeKay wrote:OokamiKasumi wrote:What? Why...?! I thought you liked spooky things?
Well... not
this type of spooky ! There's something disturbing as I watch it and I can't shake it out of my mind ^^'
I had the exact same reaction -- and I
made the silly thing! My guess is that the shading is a hair
too realistic.
DeeKay wrote:OokamiKasumi wrote:Carassaurat wrote:...Also, I think she'd be significantly improved by adding cat ears.
Like so?
FrenchDoll_kitty.jpg
Stay away from me !
(rofl, kinda overreacting but whatever :p)
LOL! It's all in good fun.
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#33
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by Stripe » Tue Oct 02, 2012 4:06 pm
THE CAT EARS ARE ACTUALLY ADORABLE. (ღ￣▽￣ღ)
Also, the updated version is great great great!
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by Carassaurat » Tue Oct 02, 2012 6:21 pm
I wanted to suggest some things, but then had way too much fun, sorry.
I think my point was that I don't particularly care for the blurry eyes and that the hair as you rendered it was rather high on contrast and strand detail.
Edit: used an attachment instead.
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by OokamiKasumi » Tue Oct 02, 2012 6:57 pm
Stripe wrote:THE CAT EARS ARE ACTUALLY ADORABLE. (ღ￣▽￣ღ)
Also, the updated version is great great great!
I'm glad you liked it!
By the way, there's a full --pose-able-- body under there.
Carassaurat wrote:I wanted to suggest some things, but then had way too much fun, sorry.
I think my point was that I don't particularly care for the blurry eyes and that the hair as you rendered it was rather high on contrast and strand detail.
Edit: used an attachment instead.
That looks absolutely stunning. A shame I can't reproduce it.
*pout* Fine, make me really feel like a crappy artist. (I liked my hair!)
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by Coren » Tue Oct 02, 2012 7:40 pm
OMG Ookami, is that the spirit of disaster? XDDD
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by OokamiKasumi » Tue Oct 02, 2012 8:22 pm
Kirroha wrote:OMG Ookami, is that the spirit of disaster? XDDD
I was considering it, since we can't use the sprite in the contest, and I kind of wanted to make my game available outside of the contest. (Now you know why I made the eyes weird.)
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by Coren » Tue Oct 02, 2012 9:18 pm
She's gorgeous. I'd love to play it when it's out. After censoring her creepy eyes.
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by OokamiKasumi » Tue Oct 02, 2012 9:48 pm
Kirroha wrote:She's gorgeous. I'd love to play it when it's out. After censoring her creepy eyes.
IF I ever get to finish it. I still have to make a Guy character too.
Sigh...
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by Coren » Tue Oct 02, 2012 10:06 pm
Carassaurat wrote:I wanted to suggest some things, but then had way too much fun, sorry.
I think my point was that I don't particularly care for the blurry eyes and that the hair as you rendered it was rather high on contrast and strand detail.
Edit: used an attachment instead.
This is so pretty! You successfully bypassed the uncanny valley, now.
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by OokamiKasumi » Tue Oct 02, 2012 11:21 pm
Kirroha wrote:Carassaurat wrote:I wanted to suggest some things, but then had way too much fun, sorry. I think my point was that I don't particularly care for the blurry eyes and that the hair as you rendered it was rather high on contrast and strand detail.
Edit: used an attachment instead.
This is so pretty! You successfully bypassed the uncanny valley, now.
Umm... That's Carassaurat work, not mine. Unfortunately, I don't have the skill to reproduce it. Sorry to disappoint.
Sigh...
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