Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#3106 Post by Niki » Mon Aug 01, 2011 2:56 am

Speed-sketch 10 minutes. :9
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#3107 Post by wingzofdarkness » Tue Aug 02, 2011 2:03 am

Memories~~~~~~ ^^ Sailor Saturn.

Excuse the terrible cell-coloring.
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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#3108 Post by BCS » Tue Aug 02, 2011 1:50 pm

Niki wrote:Speed-sketch 10 minutes. :9
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Oh, that's nice! I know that shoulders can be difficult, but isn't omitting the arms entirely kind of ... too much?

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#3109 Post by Niki » Tue Aug 02, 2011 9:34 pm

BCS wrote: Oh, that's nice! I know that shoulders can be difficult, but isn't omitting the arms entirely kind of ... too much?
I didn't intend on drawing the arms hehe >< /lazy But thanks, I'll keep that in mind! x)
When I do quick sketches like these I usually just draw from the shoulders up~ I like putting more focus into the expression ><
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#3110 Post by BCS » Wed Aug 03, 2011 11:51 am

It's easy to draw faces... bodies are hard. Also, I do like the most fucking random sketches ever. D= This isn't even vaguely related to VN projects, but like fun fanart. My digital paintings and vector work are what I drag out when people wonder why my commissions list is so long and stays long.
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#3111 Post by Jacket » Wed Aug 03, 2011 11:08 pm

Niki wrote:Speed-sketch 10 minutes. :9
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Holy shit.

You should draw for me.
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#3112 Post by Niki » Thu Aug 04, 2011 4:12 am

Jacket wrote: Holy shit.

You should draw for me.
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lmao I wouldn't mind (if you're okay with hiring me lol)! \o/ But I don't have the time now >< Busy with exams and all~
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#3113 Post by EzzyAlpha » Thu Aug 04, 2011 5:06 am

PAINTING :D

That's Nami from One Piece
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#3114 Post by azureXtwilight » Mon Aug 08, 2011 1:08 pm

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So both are done in approximately two hours, and I try to compare how both looks. Yeah they are kinda different somehow but who cares? I'm just doing a slight comparison.
The one in the left, you've seen. The one in the right, made just now. YAAAWN NOW LEMME GET SOME SLEEP D:
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#3115 Post by Fawn » Mon Aug 08, 2011 1:14 pm

Hmm well, there doesn't seem to be good direction in the hair. The shading is random, and the hair shape itself seems to fly here and there.

Tooaya's tutorials should help! : http://tooaya.deviantart.com/art/Toa-s- ... -182588141 This will teach you how to make pretty hairs @3@

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#3116 Post by azureXtwilight » Mon Aug 08, 2011 1:16 pm

Yay thanks a lot! :P

I'm trying to give a messy feeling though.
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What am I doing in 00.00 am~ =_=
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#3117 Post by MaiMai » Mon Aug 08, 2011 3:06 pm

@Azure- Proportions and shading are a bit better compared to your first pic! I like seeing the improvements.

This is just an opinion though, but I think you should try drawing different styles of eyes. What always bothered me about your art are the eyes-- You usually just draw thin lines instead of making them slightly darker (of course not ever anime/manga style is like this but I think it could improve your works just a bit) The way you draw yours gives the sense that they isn't any indication of eyelids. As a result it the eyes look very flat on the face especially since you didn't shade the eyecolor as much.

Remember, eyes are not flat objects-- they're called eyeballs for a reason, they're spherical! The drawing and shading should reflect a bit of that :)
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#3118 Post by azureXtwilight » Mon Aug 08, 2011 11:11 pm

Thanks! Is there any good eye tutorial you'll reccomend? :)
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#3119 Post by sorani » Mon Aug 08, 2011 11:24 pm

Fawn wrote:Hmm well, there doesn't seem to be good direction in the hair. The shading is random, and the hair shape itself seems to fly here and there.

Tooaya's tutorials should help! : http://tooaya.deviantart.com/art/Toa-s- ... -182588141 This will teach you how to make pretty hairs @3@
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I tried the tutorial and this is what I got. It's actually harder than I thought. T_T I really dislike detailing hair shadows...

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#3120 Post by MaiMai » Tue Aug 09, 2011 1:55 am

@Azure- Here's a few I found!
  • Kikariz's Tutorial- It gives tips on drawing different styles of anime eyes.
  • Raykit's Tutorial gives one way for coloring eyes in Photoshop. There's plenty of eye color tutorials though and definitely not one fit way to do it in terms of techniques! So try experimenting with coloring and pick up on what other people do in tutorials :)
  • Max-Factor's Tutorial-- Rather simplistic and unrefined CGing for eyes, but if you're going for simplistic this is okay.
  • MoonlitTiger's Tutorial-- Another eye drawing tutorial!
There's tons of tutorials for anime/manga eyes, I just chose out ones I thought might help. :)
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