Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#3121 Post by Fawn » Tue Aug 09, 2011 2:31 am

@sorani: Looks good so far! I wouldn't use the brush tool for skin though, just use the pen tool on a medium-high opacity and block out your colors. It's all about simplification :)

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#3122 Post by Niki » Tue Aug 09, 2011 12:06 pm

Spoiler for mild BL...
A oneshot I'm working on. >< EDIT: Eh? >< The spoiler tag doesn't work :/
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#3123 Post by Lumen_Astrum » Wed Aug 10, 2011 6:59 am

You might just want to link it instead. The spoiler tag only covers up words.

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#3124 Post by Watercolorheart » Thu Aug 11, 2011 4:30 pm

Aww, that doesn't need to be spoilered. That is incredibly mild, that's not even like PG right there. (unless you think that homosexuality is somehow more lewd than straightness... )

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#3125 Post by Hayzel » Thu Aug 11, 2011 4:44 pm

That doesn't need a spoiler at all XD It's cute! I rate it G

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#3126 Post by HigurashiKira » Thu Aug 11, 2011 11:58 pm

Niki wrote:Spoiler for mild BL...
A oneshot I'm working on. >< EDIT: Eh? >< The spoiler tag doesn't work :/
Oh God, that was adorable~
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#3127 Post by Crocosquirrel » Fri Aug 12, 2011 7:36 am

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Two images I made for a basic hidden objects game. (This is the first puzzle so it is meant to be easy).

Critiques on perspective are welcome. The flowers on the bedspread were hard and I still think they look weird.

EDIT: If you want to use wither of these in any of your projects, drop me a line and I'll send you the original files.

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#3128 Post by SusanTheCat » Fri Aug 12, 2011 10:12 am

DarkSpartan wrote:Maybe i should steal you for backgrounds... Nice work!
Thanks! I think backgrounds are my weakest point.

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#3129 Post by Niki » Fri Aug 12, 2011 11:59 am

@BCS, Hayzel, HigurashiKira: Thanks!! :oops:

Haha, I thought people might be uncomfortable with these kinds of things (BL) so I thought it would be better to put it under a spoiler tag ><
In the end my teammate and I are making my supposed-oneshot into a KN, but we probably won't put up a WIP because it's really sloppy and gross-looking right now xD;; Here's another teaser...
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#3130 Post by Snow Blossom » Fri Aug 12, 2011 11:14 pm

@ Niki
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Omigod it's adorable!! The hugged guy looks so much like a little kitty!!! XD

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#3131 Post by herpinxthexderp » Fri Aug 12, 2011 11:44 pm

@Niki ;w; You need to mass-produce and ship out robots of that hugged guy. Its too cute for words >///<

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#3132 Post by Coren » Sat Aug 13, 2011 4:21 am

I was in a genderbending mood yesterday. :D Have some Saya no Uta.

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#3133 Post by Auro-Cyanide » Sat Aug 13, 2011 3:42 pm

I really just needed to do something that wasn't work, so I did a really random, possibly slightly out of character thingy with Natsume and Chiaki from Break Chance Memento. Might finish it one day. Photoshop was not liking me today.
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#3134 Post by Fawn » Sat Aug 13, 2011 4:49 pm

@Auro, the arms seem a bit short when they're bent. It's the length of the upper arm not matching, I think.

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#3135 Post by Auro-Cyanide » Sat Aug 13, 2011 10:13 pm

I know. I suppose that is why I shouldn't be still drawing at 4 o'clock in the morning XP Photoshop lags and everything comes out wrong.

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