Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

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#3466 Post by Evie »

This was indeed very helpful! Thank you very much for your time!
There is one thing to do:
...buy a new ruler.
Putting jokes aside, I really thought that I had only one vanishing point for most objects and two for the chair. I must be more careful next time.
And of course your post includes very useful tips. Thanks a lot!

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#3467 Post by Foskowitz »

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Quick sketch of Sewer Mutant. Isn't he a doll?

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First decent female that I've drawn in a while. DAT HAND.
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#3469 Post by tuna_sushi »

Faceless WIP for an extremely short project...
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#3470 Post by wingzofdarkness »

@Foskowitz: Is that steam coming out from his head? xD Wow.
Your style is very comic-like. Do you make comics?

@HigurashiKira: It's a really nice female sketch. I love her face.

@tuna_sushi: It is cute. Is it for a visual novel game?

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#3471 Post by Foskowitz »

wingzofdarkness wrote:@Foskowitz: Is that steam coming out from his head? xD Wow.
Your style is very comic-like. Do you make comics?
Haha, no. I have trouble with backgrounds. I mostly just draw freaks and weirdos.

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#3472 Post by Mink »

This is what happens when I listen to music and draw at the same time:
You know, sort of like Xena, but wearing more clothing.
You know, sort of like Xena, but wearing more clothing.
The song was Cinderella by Tata Young. And in about 30 minutes, I will hate this picture.

Note: yes, I actually like Xena. She was the only princess I ever liked as a kid. Unless Mulan counts, somehow.
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#3473 Post by wingzofdarkness »

@Foskowitz: The style reminds me of Miyuzaki's works; something similar to Spirited Away, Castle in the Sky, and Howl's Moving Castle. Not sure if you would be happy about this comment if you're not a fan, otherwise I think it is a very different and unique art piece.

@ Mink: Oh! I loved her too! She was pretty epic then...in the old days...

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#3474 Post by tuna_sushi »

wingzofdarkness wrote: @tuna_sushi: It is cute. Is it for a visual novel game?
Thanks!
Nah, I think it will be a kinetic novel... (a remake of a story I made a long time ago)... ^_^"

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#3475 Post by wingzofdarkness »

@tuna_sushi:
Making a remake is not a bad idea. You can see your improvements that way.
Oh really? About food? :3

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#3476 Post by tuna_sushi »

wingzofdarkness:
Yes, It's going to be about food ^_^

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#3477 Post by Mink »

@wingzofdarkness: Back in the old days, TV was actually worth watching. 8C

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Gabriel-Ernest, from the story I'm currently adapting* based on 'Gabriel-Ernest' by Saki.

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#3478 Post by SaMeino »

A friend let me borrow her tablet for the weekend and I wanted to show you guys what I drew since I haven't been on this place is monthes. ^^
Can you guys give me any tips or anything that I messed up?
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#3479 Post by Junker-Kun »

Mink wrote:
Note: yes, I actually like Xena. She was the only princess I ever liked as a kid. Unless Mulan counts, somehow.
Hey, she was cool! Though, you know, her war cry was a little annoying... but hey, they had Kevin Sorbo as guest actor in one of the episodes =D
Can you guys give me any tips or anything that I messed up?
Hmmm... apart from strange looking hands I can't really say anything.
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#3480 Post by wingzofdarkness »

@SaMeino: Maybe loosen up on the pen pressure or vary the thickness/thinness of the lines? I agree the hands are a little awkward. Actually, I think it's more on the shading rather than the line work, but her thumbs should be close to her chest side and not out towards us. Also, her nose is very unusual. I love her hair design though.

@Junker-kun: Even though it was a tad annoying it doesn't dismiss the fact that it was her iconic saying xD

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