Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

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#5191 Post by Omnificent »

Hm, his right arm (our left) is a little on the short side. Other than that, it's a nice improvement.

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#5192 Post by CheeryMoya »

Omnificent wrote:Finally have a tablet again, used it as an excuse to draw a random armor design.
/screams at you to get on skype

Aaah you're getting better at hands! At this rate FA:NG's sprites are gonna be totally rad.

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#5193 Post by mjshi »

@ vividXP: I like your style, it's really clean and simple.
@ LateWhiteRabbit: ...and I'm avoiding drawing hands, too (Gary [the second image] doesn't count, he was from a ref)

My anatomy isn't great, neither are the clothing folds on the shirt...
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A work-in-progress vn character image (yes, no eyes- I thought it appropriate considering the content; and no, I did not draw the computer as I am terrible with mechanical parts.)
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#5194 Post by khnachi »

@ khnachi: Your sketches are awesome, they're cute and shiny even when they're not a clean picture, I love them :D
Thank you! :D

Dumping this sprite here
character of Itasneveradream

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well I'm going to redo this anyway(because of reasons//shot)
might as well post it here LOL

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#5195 Post by enta »

Mangafee wrote:

looks really nice ;) Your lineart is so clean orz - mine is always messy...
Thanks... I guess the times I spent experimenting lines on clip studio finally resulted something Q_Q


aherm, here's um, something I drew(painted?) for pumpkin princess' logo. Dx

It was quite rare for me to draw ANYTHING besides human beings :lol:
pumpkin~♪
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#5196 Post by mjshi »

@ khnachi: That's really good, I like how you shaded the hair and the technique you used with the eyes. However, may I suggest something? That right arm, the upper portion looks a teensy bit too wide (well, I'm no expert in proportion myself so I really shouldn't be criticizing others). I think it would maybe look better if you thinned the bottom side of the upper arm a little.
>>like this:
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#5197 Post by Kato »

khnachi wrote:
@ khnachi: Your sketches are awesome, they're cute and shiny even when they're not a clean picture, I love them :D
Thank you! :D

Dumping this sprite here
character of Itasneveradream

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well I'm going to redo this anyway(because of reasons//shot)
might as well post it here LOL
LULU! :D

Since everyone is drawing Lulu I'll post the sketch I did for Toya of her and her twin Kiko. It marks my retirement from using anatomy figures to help so my body shots are gonna be pretty dodgy for a while after this one.

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#5198 Post by Nuxill »

mjshi wrote: A work-in-progress vn character image (yes, no eyes- I thought it appropriate considering the content; and no, I did not draw the computer as I am terrible with mechanical parts.)
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You need to warp the computer a bit since the perspective is off and it doesn't look like it's sitting on the table. Are you gonna paint over it?

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#5199 Post by Itwasneveradream »

Kato wrote:
khnachi wrote:
@ khnachi: Your sketches are awesome, they're cute and shiny even when they're not a clean picture, I love them :D
Thank you! :D

Dumping this sprite here
character of Itasneveradream

Picture cropped to save space

well I'm going to redo this anyway(because of reasons//shot)
might as well post it here LOL
LULU! :D

Since everyone is drawing Lulu I'll post the sketch I did for Toya of her and her twin Kiko. It marks my retirement from using anatomy figures to help so my body shots are gonna be pretty dodgy for a while after this one.

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Lulu. Lulu everywhere *.*

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#5200 Post by Incognito »

For anyone out there who watched Psycho Pass here's Makishima Shougo Line art i did.
edit, i just finished this just now, tell me what you think guys.
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#5201 Post by Itwasneveradream »

Incognito wrote:For anyone out there who watched Psycho Pass here's Makishima Shougo Line art i did.
edit, i just finished this just now, tell me what you think guys.
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Hmmmm

The anatomy seems off. The coloring and shading seems fine, but it could be neater.
What's in his hand?
I'd redline for you, but my ipad is with someone else =.=

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#5202 Post by Nuxill »

Itwasneveradream wrote: Hmmmm

The anatomy seems off. The coloring and shading seems fine, but it could be neater.
What's in his hand?
I'd redline for you, but my ipad is with someone else =.=
The object in his hand looks like a shaving blade. It also looks like the eye is overlapping the blade a little bit. :O but at least that's an easy two second fix in [art program of choice].

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#5203 Post by Coren »

A little something for Kato: :)
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#5204 Post by Itwasneveradream »

Even MORE Lulu!

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Original sketch by 1535bic (sorry if I got the numbers wrong)
Lineart and coloring by me.

I have to say. I just found out that I can change the opacity for the layers...my life will never be the same.

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#5205 Post by janrrah18 »

Kirroha wrote:A little something for Kato: :)
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wwaaaahh!! kirroha-san you're improving alot!!!! (the truth is i have been stalking you for awhile now even in dA.)

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