Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#5311 Post by ofdawnandtwilight » Sat Apr 20, 2013 12:52 pm

@ Auro-Cyanide: And you made it! Give a big pat to yourself, your sanity has successfully handled that background very well, it looks very neat! A very good job indeed :D

@ Kirroha: :O That looks really good! I agree with wakagana though, the nose looks slightly misplaced lol who am I to judge I can't even paint right :'D


So, I finally remember why I never bothered to draw fanart =_=;;
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My friend asked me to draw Ittoki(left) and Tokiya(right) here.
I really think that I anatomically messed something up here, like, something major that I'm missing. Could anyone give me some tips to fix it? Just the anatomy though, I haven't finished much of the details yet. I'm betting that I got their sizes completely wrong or that I'm just too paranoid of the artist drawing her men big :'D
Maybe I should have just post this in Deji's redline thread, I don't know, she might be busy ^_^;;

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#5312 Post by Endorphin » Sat Apr 20, 2013 8:29 pm

Auro
I'll always look up to you because of lineart. It's so clean. <3
You did a good job, hun!

pwisaguacate
Wow, you did such a great job with the colours!
It's really pretty. :>

Kirroha
That probably depends on how realistic you want your realism. :'D
The only thing I can say apart from style is that you'd have to clean up a little, as there are some black leftovers in the middle of the face and the edges are far from clean. And yes, the nose could use some rotation.
I like the atmosphere, though~

nero279
Wish I could help you, but I suck in anatomy myself. (Though I have the feeling that Ittokis rib cage doesn't fit together with his arm. [The one with the microphone.])
The hands are looking great, by the way. =D

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Working on Caleb's sprite--don't be surprised that the body's still missing, the image is actually an accident. :'D
(I had a sketch of him in my notebook and wanted to try a different colouring style but painted his face like usual in the process. How does that even happen?)
Messiest sprite I ever had since I decided somewhere in the middle that I can actually use this and started cutting out and separating parts. /fail
Well, it's still rather rough, it's more a colour test, I guess.

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#5313 Post by mysterialize » Sat Apr 20, 2013 11:21 pm

@Obscura - Thank you so much! The fix looks excellent as well. Dat new hand.

@Endorphin - Those eyes. I'm in love with those eyes. The hair's also looking great, even at a rough stage. His part seems a little high for its point on his head, though. At that point there should probably be something of a dip downward. His lips also look like they might be a bit small when compared to his nose. Something the scale just seems every so slightly off, though I'm having trouble placing it. I'm feeling fairly certain it's the lip to nose ratio, though. But eyes. I keep looking back to those lovely eyes.

Another face, this one for a friend, and colored. I haven't tried anything close to soft shading in quite some time, so I have no idea what I was doing here.

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#5314 Post by AllegroDiRossi » Sun Apr 21, 2013 1:14 am

Blah, I haven't posted anything in ages. Like, literally almost two years. I have had no motivation to do any VN or writing in ages. I have been pretty bummed about that because I used to be so full of ideas and always drawing and thinking of the great things I wanted to make. Life has been pretty frustrating these past few years. I graduated university and worked a horrible job for a while. Then I got a really good job, but it was contract work. I'm unemployed right now, and I may be starting a new job next week. But I have had all this free time and I haven't done anything to make something new and exciting. How do I get motivated and passionate again? Is it even possible now?

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#5315 Post by TheGuraGuraMan » Sun Apr 21, 2013 6:41 am

mysterialize wrote:@Obscura - Thank you so much! The fix looks excellent as well. Dat new hand.

@Endorphin - Those eyes. I'm in love with those eyes. The hair's also looking great, even at a rough stage. His part seems a little high for its point on his head, though. At that point there should probably be something of a dip downward. His lips also look like they might be a bit small when compared to his nose. Something the scale just seems every so slightly off, though I'm having trouble placing it. I'm feeling fairly certain it's the lip to nose ratio, though. But eyes. I keep looking back to those lovely eyes.

Another face, this one for a friend, and colored. I haven't tried anything close to soft shading in quite some time, so I have no idea what I was doing here.

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Oh lol, this guy look exactly like Kakyoin from Jojo's bizarre adventure :


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#5316 Post by Hijiri » Sun Apr 21, 2013 4:35 pm

Did a practice headshot. The sketchwork and stuff was all done with my tablet.
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I know, lazy coloring Orz
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#5317 Post by Nuxill » Sun Apr 21, 2013 6:01 pm

Hijiri wrote:Did a practice headshot. The sketchwork and stuff was all done with my tablet.
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I know, lazy coloring Orz
The top of his ear is too high up. On most people the top of the ear is on the same line as the eyebrows, and the bottom is on the same line as the nose. You might also want to extend the shadows above the eyes to reach the eyebrows, since they rest right at the bottom of the forehead 'ridge'. Right now it kind of looks a bit like eyeshadow instead of actual shading because of that.

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#5318 Post by mysterialize » Sun Apr 21, 2013 6:08 pm

@GuraGura: Oh, wow. I definitely see it.

I've been getting a lot of comparison's the Jojo's Bizarre Adventure's art lately. Which is kind of funny, considering that I've never actually read it or watched it. Clearly I should. It's meant to be.

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#5319 Post by Omnificent » Sun Apr 21, 2013 10:23 pm

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#5320 Post by 15385bic » Tue Apr 23, 2013 2:08 am

AllegroDiRossi wrote: Image
wow that mask OoO!!!
so detailed and pretty

@auro - OMG you dont know how jelly i am at your backgrounds and the way you colour *A* (attempts to kidnap!)
@kirroha - great job at you first attempt at realism! O_O!!!

and here is something that almost killed MY sanity
pisces with ying and yang (well one of those fish will be black *A*! even if you cant tell by the drawing now)
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#5321 Post by azureXtwilight » Tue Apr 23, 2013 9:26 am

I have mentioned in my thread before that Fantasia MOGF is going to be cancelled, and I feel like it's unfair for me to keep Zephyr's identity until the end. It's the thing that fans have been asking for.

So I am dumping this. It's my way of saying goodbye.
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#5322 Post by Coren » Tue Apr 23, 2013 10:44 am

azureXtwilight wrote:I have mentioned in my thread before that Fantasia MOGF is going to be cancelled, and I feel like it's unfair for me to keep Zephyr's identity until the end. It's the thing that fans have been asking for.

So I am dumping this. It's my way of saying goodbye.
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What a pity. I could've picked it up. XD

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#5323 Post by DeeKay » Tue Apr 23, 2013 12:45 pm

@15385bic

Okay, that's it !
* kneels and starts worshipping this lineart goddess *
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#5324 Post by Aines445 » Tue Apr 23, 2013 4:51 pm

15385bic wrote: and here is something that almost killed MY sanity
pisces with ying and yang (well one of those fish will be black *A*! even if you cant tell by the drawing now)
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And it killed mine too! That looks like something GODS would make! So jealous....<.< And that's my sign too! I gotta train more and more so I can be god-tier, like you! (Except with my own style, but yeah, I guess you got it XD)

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#5325 Post by TsukiShima » Tue Apr 23, 2013 7:27 pm

It's been awhile since I drew something for myself. :)
And it's really hard to change your style of coloring, but I'm still trying!
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