Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

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#5326 Post by ShippoK »

Meanwhile, in another thread.

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ShippoK wrote:Meanwhile, in another thread.

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#5328 Post by eingelle »

@nero279 Ittoki's left shoulder is bit out of place...? Maybe it needs to be more round(?) and Tokiya needs a little more curve in his shirt(?) let his shirt hug his body little more tighter. :3
But advice aside, I'm happy to see some UtaPri fanart here. Your profile avatar...Camus...Camus is FABULOUS. Ahahaha!~

@Endorphin I love love love the hair. The colour. The brush strokes! :D His eyes are beautiful too.

@mysterialize I like his smile. 8D ...He looks so sinister. That blush makes him cute though. ...A cute bad-guy? Anyways, I like him. Hehe.

@AllegroDiRossi Oh my... I hope you do get your new job. Hopefully it'll be better than your previous.
Your art is gorgeous. The mask is the first thing I look at, it's so pretty. Then I look at the eyes, also so pretty! * u *

@Omnificent I really love this art style! :D Your character is a guy right? He looks cute. ^o^
His clothes are also cool yet simple. <3

@15385bic So...sooooo prettyyyy!!~ So prooooo!!~ ; o ; *faints*

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@ShippoK O . O !!!??? Oh my. I... I don't know what to say about this...


. . . Okay, I'm gonna dump a WIP screenie mixed with some finished sprites.
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I'm working on a smaller VN game to get more familiar with Ren'py... :'D<br />It will have a flat-chested/tomboyish female protagonist (who loves shoujo manga and otome games),&quot;twins&quot;, coffee, and a fancy cafe.<br />Yes, I re-used one of my pre-existing character sprites for the brown-haired twins. ;u; I'm too lazy to make a new one. /shame
I'm working on a smaller VN game to get more familiar with Ren'py... :'D
It will have a flat-chested/tomboyish female protagonist (who loves shoujo manga and otome games),"twins", coffee, and a fancy cafe.
Yes, I re-used one of my pre-existing character sprites for the brown-haired twins. ;u; I'm too lazy to make a new one. /shame

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#5329 Post by ShippoK »

eingelle wrote: . . . Okay, I'm gonna dump a WIP screenie mixed with some finished sprites.
Hm, I think you should at least flip it or put the arm down for either the boy/girl twin.
It does seem very copy-pasted that I almost thought it was a guy crossdressing on the right! Left!
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#5330 Post by 15385bic »

looks up at "aunty'' mugen.........

looks down a little and sees a cross dressing girl/guy.......

*wonders what thread im in XD

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@eingelle - your sprites are so neat - and really like how you colour
and heeelloooo megane guy~~~~~ i like the hair style of the one to the right more

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#5331 Post by tiya_nofurita »

Basically I can throw anything here, am I correct ? I don't mind if the Mods delete my post because my excuse seems ridiculously inappropriate

....well, now what
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#5332 Post by TheGuraGuraMan »

Okay, here is my last drawing, a sprite. Almost finished it (still have to make the left hand).

It's not perfect, but I'm more or less satisfied of it. Critiques and/or redlines are welcome :)
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#5333 Post by Tag- »

@Bic
You never fail to amaze me with your finesse and attention to details *v* The fish look particularly awesome, and the details on her dress are just stunning~~

@tiya_nofurita
You can dump anything art-related here, yes :D (I mean, if the 'aunty' Mugen is posted here I think pretty much anything goes xD)


And as for me, I'm unsure as to which hairstyle I should use for this particular character. Would anyone like to share their thoughts? :'D
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#5334 Post by eingelle »

Tag- wrote: And as for me, I'm unsure as to which hairstyle I should use for this particular character. Would anyone like to share their thoughts? :'D
I personally like the second one. ^^
But I think personality plays a role in this matter.
The first hairstyle gives off a more natural look. The second, shows an upbeat attitude. While the third one is more prim and proper.
I know you're not suppose to judge someone by appearance... but hey, it's character design. ^^;;;

Maybe it would help if you describe your character a bit?

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#5335 Post by tiya_nofurita »

Tag- wrote: And as for me, I'm unsure as to which hairstyle I should use for this particular character. Would anyone like to share their thoughts? :'D
The second one look more...natural and stylish . But it depends on your character personality after all.
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#5336 Post by SundownKid »

Tag- wrote: And as for me, I'm unsure as to which hairstyle I should use for this particular character. Would anyone like to share their thoughts? :'D
The first one is the most good-looking in my eyes, but depending on her personality you can use either of them. Second one might fit well with a more sporty and energetic personality, while the third one might work with a more refined personality. (Mainly because that type of hairstyle is used for those types in anime, but the ponytail especially seems like something a sporty girl would do).

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#5337 Post by Tag- »

@eingelle, tiya_nofurita, SundownKid
Thank you, guys! I actually haven't decided on a concrete personality for her yet, but you guys are definitely right in that her hair style contributes to how people see her.
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#5338 Post by Lumen_Astrum »

I haven't drawn Touhou fanart for the past few days, so here's a Parsee thingie.

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#5339 Post by Rakuen »

Tag- > Awesome! She's really pretty :33 I prefer the second one. Just one little thing, the shoulder should not be more like this? http://d6.e-loader.net/GeH9vURRm0.png
For my part, I only have this to show: http://d26.e-loader.net/7oYADVoh7x.png
And some sketches: http://d35.e-loader.net/m3O76WTmpu.png
that's it~

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#5340 Post by Auro-Cyanide »

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I'll stick this here because I think I'll keep my other thread for slightly more finished things.

I design my characters properly so rarely that this is only the second time I’ll actually know what the back of my characters looks like because of PLANNING.

Seriously guys, this is an important moment, I’m actually trying :’)
… I’m not a detail person.

Anyway, I’m working on doing detailed character sheets now so I can figure out how everything actually works and so I don’t just draw what’s pretty.

Because when you go to do CGs and suddenly there’s angles everywhere, you are going to want to know what is actually going on.

Also, I don’t really know how to draw people from behind, so I guess this will be really good practice for me.

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