Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#5521 Post by MomoiroGirl » Sun Jun 09, 2013 1:53 pm

Ermergerhd, everyone's posting so many awesome pieces of art suddenly @___@

Anyway, I finally regained my motivation to draw (again lol), and I've been practicing semi-realism a bit more now, and i feel like I'm finally making some notable progress! :D

This is pretty much my first OC, I'd like to see myself using her for something (hopefully an otome game, if I EVER get around to doing that), so I still haven't given her a name yet, but I'm thinking I might call her Elizabeth.
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#5522 Post by Coren » Mon Jun 10, 2013 12:03 pm

^ This looks beautiful! :) I think there shouldn't be that many folds in her dress since she's already tugging at the hemline, though. But wow it's pretty and really good for a first try.

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#5523 Post by Katon » Tue Jun 11, 2013 3:17 am

Been messing around with a new style

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#5524 Post by merdeamour » Tue Jun 11, 2013 6:07 am

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That's gorgeous! O.o Funny, I thought 'Elizabeth' as soon as I saw her. Must be the blond hair haha.

As for the skirt... I'm no artist AT ALL, but the folds that Kirroha mentioned look natural to me (especially if she's wearing a flowy circle skirt or even a skater skirt)--Her hand doesn't look like it's tugging on the hem, but rather holding it loosely.

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#5525 Post by Auro-Cyanide » Tue Jun 11, 2013 10:57 am

Was feeling really sentimental tonight, so I did a sketch of Shuuki :'D I have to go and collapse in bed now.
Also, thank you everybody who have opinions on the colouring! It was very interesting to hear \(^u^)/

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#5526 Post by azureXtwilight » Tue Jun 11, 2013 12:30 pm

Jun is apparently very popular in doppelganger character poll XD So here's a quickie~
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#5527 Post by khfan12 » Tue Jun 11, 2013 8:21 pm

Some expressions for Selene :I

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#5528 Post by Lumen_Astrum » Wed Jun 12, 2013 3:41 am

A commission from a roleplayer in tumblr. Man, how do you shade doors if they're all flat and stuff, I don't get it.

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I was proud of the coloring but I don't know what else to be proud of uguu. And yay League of Legends ;v;

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#5529 Post by Endorphin » Wed Jun 12, 2013 12:11 pm

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Hun, you've gotten so much better, it's really a reason to be proud of oneself!
I really like the atmosphere, and the facial expressions make me wonder what they are thinking/what happened.
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#5530 Post by MomoiroGirl » Wed Jun 12, 2013 4:43 pm

@Kirroha

Thank you! :D Yeaa, I know they are kinda overboard, I've just been desperate for some while, wanting to give my drawings more "life", so I tried like crazy to make her look like she was actually twirling a bit XD In my head her skirt is just SO wide that unless it's held out straight at FOUR points, like a square, you'll still see folds XD (I have a fixation on twirly dresses XD) I appreciate your critique! :D


@merdeamour

Thank you very much! XD Hahah, I did feel that the name Elizabeth was a BIT obvious, but I can't help but think it fits her! Thanks for the comment on deviantart as well (again, assuming that it was you XD)n Lots of love from here ^u^

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#5531 Post by khfan12 » Wed Jun 12, 2013 4:56 pm

MomoiroGirl wrote:Ermergerhd, everyone's posting so many awesome pieces of art suddenly @___@Anyway, I finally regained my motivation to draw (again lol), and I've been practicing semi-realism a bit more now, and i feel like I'm finally making some notable progress! This is pretty much my first OC, I'd like to see myself using her for something (hopefully an otome game, if I EVER get around to doing that), so I still haven't given her a name yet, but I'm thinking I might call her Elizabeth.
*commenting late on your picuture*
She's so pretty! I agree, Elizabeth would be a good name for her.

Here's one of Selene's expressions, digital version!
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#5532 Post by Mink » Wed Jun 12, 2013 5:01 pm

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#5533 Post by MomoiroGirl » Wed Jun 12, 2013 8:40 pm

@khfan12

Thank you very much! ^o^


I just did another drawing, practice, practice, practice y'know XD i guess it just started out as a self-portrait of me as a kid, but then I kind imagined it into a possible child-version of Elizabeth, so oh well, I guess that's what it is hahah XD At any rate, I just felt like practicing again.
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#5534 Post by Hijiri » Wed Jun 12, 2013 10:36 pm

Dropping off this drawing I just did:
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I'm either getting decent at design or getting worse at drawing...
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#5535 Post by ShippoK » Wed Jun 12, 2013 10:49 pm

Hijiri wrote: I'm either getting decent at design or getting worse at drawing...
No, no! I think you're getting better Hijiri!

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