Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

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#6076 Post by MomoiroGirl »

I feel like I keep getting worse and worse at drawing manga .___.
Wanted to try drawing my avatar on Gaia, and it is just... fail DX Well, I guess I should start practicing manga more again <____<
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#6077 Post by MaiMai »

MomoiroGirl wrote:I feel like I keep getting worse and worse at drawing manga .___.
Wanted to try drawing my avatar on Gaia, and it is just... fail DX Well, I guess I should start practicing manga more again <____<
I think what you should try if you want to get better at drawing manga is try drawing different styles of eyes. I notice that you seem to stick to the same cute rounded shape so breaking out of the mold might help?
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#6078 Post by Happysmily »

MomoiroGirl wrote:I feel like I keep getting worse and worse at drawing manga .___.
Wanted to try drawing my avatar on Gaia, and it is just... fail DX Well, I guess I should start practicing manga more again <____<
I wanna agree with MaiMai, doing something out of the norm really helps out a lot!
Also, the way you do hair is really fun and adorable, I can only wish to do hair that fluffy looking..

On another note; I'm getting down some concepts for my game, the first guy being the protagonist and the rest being love interests:
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#6079 Post by ofdawnandtwilight »

I wanted to test out some new things and styles so I made a whole customizable sprite :'D This is the first time I used cell-shading seriously so I'm hoping to get some feedback if possible c: I don't think I did a very good job though OTL
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#6080 Post by khnachi »

nero279 wrote:I wanted to test out some new things and styles so I made a whole customizable sprite :'D This is the first time I used cell-shading seriously so I'm hoping to get some feedback if possible c: I don't think I did a very good job though OTL
what are you talking about?! she looks very pretty. :shock:
your cell-shading is clean and crisp unlike mine./hits

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#6081 Post by Tag- »

nero279 wrote:I wanted to test out some new things and styles so I made a whole customizable sprite :'D This is the first time I used cell-shading seriously so I'm hoping to get some feedback if possible c: I don't think I did a very good job though OTL
I think you did a great job! I absolutely love love love the colours you used for her hair! :D. I definitely think you're on the right track for cel shading \^0^/. A few of the wrinkle shades on her shirt look a little unnatural (particularly around the mid-section), but you're making really good progress!
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#6082 Post by Starshine »

tiya_nofurita wrote:Starshine : Awwww that's adorable >.<

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#6083 Post by Starshine »

Her hair is now pink because of plot reasons.[/quote]

I like what you did with her hair, pink hair always wins in the style/fashion department.
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#6084 Post by Auro-Cyanide »

I had to make a card for my manager tonight, so I didn’t get to settle into sprite making. Instead I did a quick sketch just so I did ‘something creative’ tonight. Thus, Miranda surfing.

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#6085 Post by ofdawnandtwilight »

@khnachi: asdfgddsags Thank you! That means so much to me >v<

@Tag- : Thank you! :D Yes, I agree that the shading looks unnatural, clothes have always been one of my weaknesses :'D Glad to know that I'm on the right track, I've always been scared of cel shading. Thank you very much for the feedback, I'll try to improve :3

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#6086 Post by MomoiroGirl »

@MaiMai: Yea, I have a habit of sticking to drawing a certain type of girl character >__> It's actually been quite a while since I've just spent time making lots of practice sketching, I mostly just make drawings .__. It's probably time to do more practicing now '''

@Happysmily: Thank you :D I don't know why, I just always think that the hair is one of the most fun things to draw XD
Btw, those guys are damn hot /thumbs up

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#6087 Post by azureXtwilight »

Drawing a short comic panel just for the heck of it~
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#6088 Post by khnachi »

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you're welcome dear. :mrgreen:

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this is just so precious, I'm kind of glad that I played reset so I can understand a bit of this.

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she looks so cool...and that's only a sketch... :shock:

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#6089 Post by tiya_nofurita »

khnachi : He looks cool! Quickly finish that pic and post here again! :3

As for myself, I feel kinda like to post here again :3
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#6090 Post by Starshine »

tiya_nofurita wrote:khnachi : He looks cool! Quickly finish that pic and post here again! :3

As for myself, I feel kinda like to post here again :3
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I love the shine in that art piece. Omg your the creator of Pharmacy Quiz i never noticed until i read your signature in the completed area, that was the game i played which gave me a idea for a quiz game... which i erm gave up on. :lol:
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