Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#481 Post by Twar3Draconis »

Here is some of mine:
http://twar3net.mine.nu/files/images/sc ... review.jpg (shrunk down by drupal).
http://twar3net.mine.nu/files/images/aoitsuki_cg.jpg

EDIT: Hotlink does not work. Posted links to the original page in same order.
http://twar3net.mine.nu/?q=node/5&size=preview
http://twar3net.mine.nu/?q=node/4

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Both are prototype/concept art.
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#482 Post by chisa-chan »

2 of 4 characters in my WIP VN
Is there anything to be fixed from the art? I'm open at suggestions.

Note: Seems that the VN is delayed. My editor is quite hard to get contact at.
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#483 Post by lordcloudx »

chisa-chan: looks good to me. If you want to be picky, try moving the nose a bit for the guy with white hair, to the right. Also, using digital outlines would fix those slightly shaky lines (probably caused by bleeding ink.)
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#484 Post by ciel »

Art dumpage my favorite!
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I just wanted to practice this style because Cel-shading gets boring.

This thing crashed on me like 10 times. Seriously. I was just very very persistent. It took me 3 days or so, but if you count all the times I had to start over because of shitty Painter, It would be more like a week.

Both Photoshop + Painter. Painter for mostly clothes and skin. Photoshop for accessories and hair. ^^ (hair thanx to Merekat's tutorial! I never could get it right on my own)

I havne't done this style too much though so I'm not very good at it yet.. everything looks... not together? wahtever the word is.

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^ the bling bling looks good only when its zoomed in...

I'm still working on the game... I'm half way done after working on it halfassed for two years. sigh. haha perhaps I'll finish it this summer?

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#485 Post by DaFool »

Wow...that's in an entirely different league altogether :D

That's the sort of Vargas / Vallejo / Sorayama hyper-realistic style I admire.

Although, spending 3 days per picture will not help your visual novel get completed :?
I hope you stuck with that old style I saw many months back, for the game at least.

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#486 Post by Drawfag »

1. Looks around and see if someone is looking.
2. Copy Pasta image.
3. Wait and see if someone finally figures what exactly is going on.
3. ???????
4. Profit

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#487 Post by mikey »

evidently mugenjohncel ^_^ wrote:3. Wait and see if someone finally figures what exactly is going on.
This is a completely obvious picture, North Sand Island was in Moonlight Walks. So... Mary's Revenge? :wink:

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#488 Post by Hime »

Oh my, aside from the PS-brush-grass in a few places, that bg is like... Godly! GODLY!
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#489 Post by Ren »

mikey wrote:
evidently mugenjohncel ^_^ wrote:3. Wait and see if someone finally figures what exactly is going on.
This is a completely obvious picture, North Sand Island was in Moonlight Walks. So... Mary's Revenge? :wink:
Scary O_O

Aaah, Naru, those are really cute!I like this style a lot.Did you use some kind of reference?The anatomy is really good :3
XD Chisa-chan, your drawings are really cute, I like the soft colouring(and yay, bishounens!).I agree with LordCloud though:Norris' nose should be a bit more to the right.

Me too, me too!>_<
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#490 Post by PyTom »

"Mary's Revenge"? I don't know about that... I mean, having a parody of the demo game is one thing, but I kinda like "Moonlight Walks".
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#491 Post by DaFool »

Awesome Light-kun :D

This something that I feel really stupid to ask, but how on earth does one get smooth sketchy lines of varying line thickness on the computer? I know this can somewhat be done with the pen tool in photoshop, but the result will not be sketchy.

This sketchy concept-art style is a trait of Japanese style... it looks hand-drawn because of the super-smooth strokes, and yet it feels so clean that I doubt it is entirely hand-drawn.

Or is it just inked on paper then touched up on computer?

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#492 Post by Ren »

DaFool wrote:Awesome Light-kun :D

This something that I feel really stupid to ask, but how on earth does one get smooth sketchy lines of varying line thickness on the computer? I know this can somewhat be done with the pen tool in photoshop, but the result will not be sketchy.

This sketchy concept-art style is a trait of Japanese style... it looks hand-drawn because of the super-smooth strokes, and yet it feels so clean that I doubt it is entirely hand-drawn.

Or is it just inked on paper then touched up on computer?
I suppose you're talking to me?XD that's not Raito, but now that you mention it he does look like him O_O(he was actually meant to look like some kind of evil Ganondorf/Link fusion bishounen).This particular picture was sketched entirely on Painter, i like Systemax Sai's likes better though...ehr, I think i get that kind of lines on paper as well though.

The varying thickness is achieved with my lovely tablet, you can actually get that kind of lines in Photoshop as well if you play around with your brush settings.

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#493 Post by Vatina »

mugenjohncel >> Whoa, those are some amazing bg's :o

I wish I could do something like that. But I'll just stick to manipulated photos for now... lol ^^;

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#494 Post by musical74 »

kind of wonder if mugenjohncel is planning to do something with Moonlight Walks? Seems the latest things are from Moonlight Walks...(yeah, I agree that the pictures look like Mary from Moonlight Walks too)
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#495 Post by ciel »

Aaah, Naru, those are really cute!I like this style a lot.Did you use some kind of reference?The anatomy is really good :3
I didn't use any reference and that's why some stuff might look.. off ^^ haha.

I LUV the pictures you attached! I absolutely love that kinda style *huggles*

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