Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

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#6406 Post by MomoiroGirl »

@chocojax: Is that Mary from Ib? o.o

@Iaikaa: It looks good too! :D It's also sometimes the small details that make something great! ^o^

@Laniessa: Really nice perspective you captured! :D

@MaiMai: Wow congrats, you improved a lot! :D It's so clean-looking~


I coloured my Venus drawing, man it was a pain to draw the hair all over again DX
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#6407 Post by azureXtwilight »

Haven't drawn for a looong timeee
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#6408 Post by TheGuraGuraMan »

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#6409 Post by Shinoki »

Doodle~ doodle~ doodle~ (...meanwhile, I'm browsing through this thread...up to pg 200...)
I'm not particularly planning to do the art for the vn project that I'm doing...
...but it'd be nice to get some critique on this.
XD It'd be so awkward to as for some red-lining considering that I was just lazy...
and decided to do a trace of a scanned doodle...in red...
Anyways, yea~
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(The clothes-I haven't particularly worked on, but they're my enemy
There was supposed to be a collar bone...but it got lost somewhere in time...
The right arm...I'm pretty sure that it's twisted in a weird way...
anyways~ :3 yea...*runs out of things to say*)

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#6410 Post by MaiMai »

@ Shinoki: Okay, I made a correction. Usually, I'd write notes on the picture itself, but I'll type out about why I made certain parts the way I did.

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* I made the head smaller and made the neck more slender because they were too big in the original, the neck especially. You also did not make it clear about where she was facing so I changed it to a 3/4s profile instead

* The hairline is supposed to follow the shape of the head. A sphere doesn't go straight down, it's a round object so keep that in mind.

* I can tell you were trying to do a dynamic hand position, but I'd try avoid foreshortening and focus on making more correct anatomy instead.

* Overall, you just need to google more references for things you have trouble with such as hands, shirts, etc. Study how shirts look on people, what kind of folds they make (and that way you can fudge it more easily when you draw it freehand)
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#6411 Post by khnachi »

@TsukiShima
thanks, she actually said that she liked it.

@nankaimo
thank you. :)

dumping this practice sprite here, I think this is one of the reason why I rarely do cell shading. :|
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#6412 Post by tiya_nofurita »

khanachi : why? your cell shading is really good for me O.o

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#6413 Post by chocojax »

MomoiroGirl wrote:@chocojax: Is that Mary from Ib? o.o
Mhm. I was listening to some music from Ib, so. :P

After seeing MaiMai do that redraw meme thing, I decided to look back into my history again, and found this abomination on the left. :(
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#6414 Post by MaiMai »

That's pretty good improvement chocojax! I love how distinct your drawing style has gotten over the years.
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#6415 Post by MomoiroGirl »

@chocojax: It looks really good! :D Also following you on tumblr now~

Tried to practice something with more emotion than I normally do (don't mind the horridly drawn hand and foot XD)
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#6416 Post by Tempus »

Re-did this BG in full HD (click the image for a bigger, not awfully resized and pixellated by Photobucket version) for the VN Rainbow Love.

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#6417 Post by Shinoki »

@MaiMai: Arigatou for the criticism. I'll take that into mind~ :3

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#6418 Post by serefine-hitsu-mori »

I've been trying to create a sprite here.... Named Miyako. Any suggestions, guys? (I do not shadow clothes well. >.< Gotta work on that. :/
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#6419 Post by serefine-hitsu-mori »

azureXtwilight wrote:Haven't drawn for a looong timeee
Woah, that bright luminescent quality! I've been trying to get it for some time now. Practice time, practice time~

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#6420 Post by Rinima »

Bleg. My attempt at something meaningful X.x

"The look at them self in the mirror and see nothing but a failure, unhappy in their own skin, and yet so aware of what others think. So they shield themselves from the harsh world and judging eyes with a mask. A mass made of lies.

They know their imperfect.

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