Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#6826 Post by tiya_nofurita » Fri Oct 31, 2014 10:13 am

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#6827 Post by TheGuraGuraMan » Sat Nov 01, 2014 6:23 am

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#6828 Post by MaiMai » Sat Nov 01, 2014 1:17 pm

Tempus wrote:@MaiMai: I like the colouring of the last two characters you've posted!
Thanks, Tempus! The coloring I've been doing is actually (and laughably) simple; I just lay down flats and apply a some texture layers and overlays plus, luminosity on SAI. :P
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#6829 Post by MaiMai » Sat Nov 01, 2014 11:38 pm

It would be in bad taste to double post, but I actually drew another picture! (Some of you who hang around on Tumblr probably recognize this.)
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#6830 Post by Broyi » Sun Nov 02, 2014 12:02 am

Would it be okay if I dump art? Anyway... critic please! :oops:
The files aren't fit for the forum, so I'm gonna post the links. Please note some of those are kiiiinda unfinished. And kinda means 'not shaded because I forgot'.

[*] Surprised pose
[*] Troll pose
[*] Character named Luke
[*] Catherine not the crazy one
[*] A guy
[*] Chibis

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#6831 Post by MaiMai » Sun Nov 02, 2014 3:28 pm

Broyi wrote:Would it be okay if I dump art? Anyway... critic please! :oops:
The files aren't fit for the forum, so I'm gonna post the links. Please note some of those are kiiiinda unfinished. And kinda means 'not shaded because I forgot'.

[*] Surprised pose
[*] Troll pose
[*] Character named Luke
[*] Catherine not the crazy one
[*] A guy
[*] Chibis
What is it that you would like to be critiqued on, Broyi? I think there are a lot of things you can improve on and at least the first thing I can suggest is working on studying human anatomy. Is there something else you had in mind that you would like to focus on aside from that though?
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#6832 Post by Broyi » Sun Nov 02, 2014 7:50 pm

Actually, I'm looking for critic for everything. Maybe shadowing? I'm having some slight troubles with that one.
Should I shadow with pen or with airbrush? Or with something else?

~ Edit ~
An example of shading with pen is the 'Chibi' one, and an example with airbrush is Luke.

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#6833 Post by Sayumi101 » Mon Nov 03, 2014 6:42 am

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A sprite commission I did. First time drawing balloon-y clothes ^^; (Yes, I mentally call them that, rather than 17th Century Gowns >.<)
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#6834 Post by MaiMai » Mon Nov 03, 2014 1:32 pm

Broyi wrote:Actually, I'm looking for critic for everything. Maybe shadowing? I'm having some slight troubles with that one.
Should I shadow with pen or with airbrush? Or with something else?

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An example of shading with pen is the 'Chibi' one, and an example with airbrush is Luke.
In terms of coloring/shading technique, you can use either pen or airbrush. There's no one set way. I made a list of digital art tutorials so you can look at one of the coloring tutorials to see how people approach shading.

I think you really need to improve on drawing human figures before worrying about coloring though. Here's another list of resources for art fundamentals, with anatomy at the top: http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 80#p195266

I really stress anatomy because you may be drawing in an anime/manga style, but it won't look good if you don't learn/teach yourself the basics. Right now, the immediate problem I see with your characters is that they look like blobs, due to the fact that there's no structure to their bodies and faces. A good thing, however, is that they're quite expressive.
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MC_normal.png
A sprite commission I did. First time drawing balloon-y clothes ^^; (Yes, I mentally call them that, rather than 17th Century Gowns >.<)
Thoughts?
The colors on the dress are nice. I think the textures are overdone, however, and it overpowers your normal shading. The lineart needs to be a little neater in my opinion and I think the anatomy could be tweaked a little because the shoulder looks wider than the actual skirt of the dress even though it's supposed to be balloon-y.

Keep it up! :D
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#6835 Post by DarkSin » Wed Nov 05, 2014 4:12 am

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#6836 Post by Auro-Cyanide » Wed Nov 05, 2014 5:46 am

Some screens I mocked up for our 48hr Asylum Jam game, Saving Zoey.

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#6837 Post by Stilts » Wed Nov 05, 2014 5:56 am

Tried my hand at a more realistic style in this Fanart of Freedom Wars.
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#6838 Post by noeinan » Wed Nov 05, 2014 7:34 am

Super nice GUI, Auro-Cyanide. :D
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#6839 Post by Sayumi101 » Thu Nov 06, 2014 10:59 am

MaiMai wrote: I think the textures are overdone, however, and it overpowers your normal shading. The lineart needs to be a little neater in my opinion and I think the anatomy could be tweaked a little because the shoulder looks wider than the actual skirt of the dress even though it's supposed to be balloon-y.
It's funny you should say that since I'd only just discovered textures >.< So I went a little bit craaaaazy with them. Anatomy is one of my weak points so I'll try my best to brush up on it more. ^^
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#6840 Post by piichimi » Fri Nov 07, 2014 11:01 am

WIP title screen art for my VN, A+ Switch!
Still need to add a decent background, and line and color the girls ^-^
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