Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

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#6901 Post by Aviala »

Broyi wrote:Shinoki, who's showing their bangs? I get that the one on the left is kinda bald but what other thing? Maybe you could number 1 to 9 and tell me which one has what error? Maybe here or at a PM...?

Also, I'm pretty sure it would be hard to shell out all the sprites and official art to find someone with the same hairstyle. I mean like... look the guy at the left! His hair is antigravity! :lol:

(This is also directed to everyone. Every critique good or bad is OK! I'm really concerned about anatomy, coloring and shadowing.)

I made you a quick redline thing, I hope you don't mind! Keep practising, you'll get better :D
Try looking a some reference images of anime characters you like and copying them. (for practise, of course, not for VN sprites).
Also look at images of real people and copy them! It's super important to learn realistic anatomy as well.
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#6902 Post by Railgun »

@Laniessa, thx! Good luck on your (very promising) game :)

@Corvo, I love your style :D

Lots of chara design for Onidria this past month:
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#6903 Post by wingzofdarkness »

@Stilts: Loving that style *0*

@Railgun: Dayuum, those WIPs must require a lot time! Keep going, looking great! :3


As for me, I haven't drawn for half a year! But I'm back!
And because I can't write for poop, I can only draw a game that will never exist, Looool........

......oTL

(Playstation does not own this, and I do not own PS. Design only for fun and not commerial)
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#6904 Post by Didules »

Back to digital drawings after 3 weeks.... It's been a while :lol:
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#6906 Post by tiya_nofurita »

Dayum @wingzofdarkness : is that BL-game? I'm in :lol:
superb coloring you have here!
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#6907 Post by CSV »

First post in this topic! I finally understood how to upload images to the forums - it is really easy and obvious too, I don't know how I didn't see it before ORZ...
I think the scanner messed up the colors a bit...
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#6908 Post by nyulyasha9696 »

Tried to redraw a photo from google, but stucked cause it seems smth wrong with it :?
help me please
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#6909 Post by Didules »

nyulyasha9696 wrote:Tried to redraw a photo from google, but stucked cause it seems smth wrong with it :?
help me please
Something is wrong with your perspective lines (it's quite normal if you're making this from a photo, it happens sometimes).
For instance the lines of the bed are wrong. I hope you don't mind I drew a little over your picture ^^"
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Using the walls, I searched for the vanishing point (red) to check, and then re-did the bed just to check it, and poof, it appeared!

I'm not a pro when it comes to perspective, but whenever you redraw from a photo, try to check where the vanishing points are by using the walls, that's what I usually do and it really helps ^w^

I hope this was useful ^^
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#6910 Post by deviltales »

A friend of mine complained once that I draw far too many women and no men at all. To please her, I drew them both for practicing purposes.
Number 1 is an unnamed pirate lady-because I love pirates <3
Number 2 is my beloved Johnny :lol:
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#6911 Post by nyulyasha9696 »

Didules,
finally I decided to draw myself ) but thank you)
I think it looks much better + I erased unnecessary furniture (table etc.)
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#6912 Post by Corvo »

Thanks nyulyasha9696, Railgun. ^^
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#6913 Post by Broyi »

Thanks for that guide BTW! I'm not near my tablet right now but I'll make sure to practice. The size of the sprite is because I'm a scaredy cat and didn't use all the space avalible... which means...... TIME TO REMAKE!

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#6914 Post by Stilts »

Practicing a painterly style again. This time I did some fan art of Tokyo Ghouls' Kirishima Touka.
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#6915 Post by Didules »

nyulyasha9696 wrote:Didules,
finally I decided to draw myself ) but thank you)
I think it looks much better + I erased unnecessary furniture (table etc.)
Indeed it looks much more personnal and natural ^^ Good job!


Trying things....but it makes no sense at all ><"
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