Broyi wrote:Shinoki, who's showing their bangs? I get that the one on the left is kinda bald but what other thing? Maybe you could number 1 to 9 and tell me which one has what error? Maybe here or at a PM...?
Also, I'm pretty sure it would be hard to shell out all the sprites and official art to find someone with the same hairstyle. I mean like... look the guy at the left! His hair is antigravity! :lol:
(This is also directed to everyone. Every critique good or bad is OK! I'm really concerned about anatomy, coloring and shadowing.)
I made you a quick redline thing, I hope you don't mind! Keep practising, you'll get better :D
Try looking a some reference images of anime characters you like and copying them. (for practise, of course, not for VN sprites).
Also look at images of real people and copy them! It's super important to learn realistic anatomy as well.