Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

[PaupauSenpai]

I'm drawing my character for my visual novel and it's a new style for me so I just wanna gush about it ahmigad 8D

[nyulyasha9696]

Without any stuff it looks naked, but I'll draw it later (every thing will have about 3 different positions, for ex. blanket, bag etc)
any feedback please )

[Aviala]

Without any stuff it looks naked, but I'll draw it later (every thing will have about 3 different positions, for ex. blanket, bag etc)
any feedback please )

Hey there!
As you said, it looks a bit naked now so maybe you want to add a drawer or a chair or a plant or something like that to the left side.
The perspective looks pretty good, good job on that! The only thing that really seems off to me are the lines on the blanket. They should be about on the same angle as the pillow's bottom line. Check out my the attached image.

The only thing that really needs improvement is the colouring. The room doesn't look very welcoming because there's so much white space; it kinda reminds me of a hospital room.
It seems to me that you've only used transparent brushes when painting the room. It can be an interesting effect, kinda like watercolour, but since it seems like you're not super experienced with colouring, I would recommend you to first fill the space you want to colour with a non-transparent base colour and then adding shadows and highlights. You can still achieve a painting-like look and it'll look more realistic. Your colours look a bit washed out because of the transparency. I'd suggest using slightly stronger colours.

I did a little thing to show you what I mean. I did it in paint & with my laptop's touchpad so the lines are really shitty, but I think you can still see what I mean. If I had my drawing tablet I could show you better but sadly I don't have it with me here at my parent's place.

[RedVampyr]

Without any stuff it looks naked, but I'll draw it later (every thing will have about 3 different positions, for ex. blanket, bag etc)
any feedback please )

I really like it, I like the watercolor style

[truefaiterman]

Without any stuff it looks naked, but I'll draw it later (every thing will have about 3 different positions, for ex. blanket, bag etc)
any feedback please )

Aviala's feedback is pretty good, but I'd like to add something else:

Try to make more defined lights and shadows, and add more contrast: this way everything should have way more volume, and the light source would be clear.

[Hazel-Bun]

Making concept art for this project! You should check it out ;v; Gonna tweak/finish the coloring soon, clean the lines up, then move on to the next one.

[Tempus]

Just finished this BG for Sickness:

[nyulyasha9696]

truefaiterman, Aviala

Wow, thank you both for so good feedback! I'll work hard ) It's actually my first bg coloring, so I'm in style-searching now. I use mac, so in SAI I can't customise brushes (everybody has the same problem on mac? I can't find folder with brushes U_U) and watercolor brush was the one I liked ) however, I see that picture looks very pale, so I will do something with it. Thanks again )

[Xerofit51]

I have weird taste in shoes

[RenCake]

So i created these 7 boys for a project (game) i'm working on but i think my art style is a little funky. For one, no matter what, i always address my love for big eyes into almost anything i draw so they all, save for the 4th guy, have big eyes. Two, i only know how to draw portrait! If anything, i'll draw shoulders and then i'm done. Anything below that involving clothes and just plain anatomy is beyond me. Besides that.. i think they look OK.. what do you guys think?

http://sta.sh/01lhsfkn2v8p

[curry nochi rice]

fresh out of a Sunday evening.

[tiya_nofurita]

Trying to do painting style because cell shading is too much problems
failed miserably

[nyulyasha9696]

I've just founded new style for my bg

[Inksword]

Just doing some expressions doodles. I hadn't quite figured out how her nose looked from the front though...

[truefaiterman]

I just made this DeviantArt meme to end my artistic year. Let's see how 2015 goes...