Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

Questions, skill improvement, and respectful critique involving art assets.
Message
Author
User avatar
trooper6
Lemma-Class Veteran
Posts: 3712
Joined: Sat Jul 09, 2011 10:33 pm
Projects: A Close Shave
Location: Medford, MA
Contact:

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#7246 Post by trooper6 »

I love it!
A Close Shave:
*Last Thing Done (Aug 17): Finished coding emotions and camera for 4/10 main labels.
*Currently Doing: Coding of emotions and camera for the labels--On 5/10
*First Next thing to do: Code in all CG and special animation stuff
*Next Next thing to do: Set up film animation
*Other Thing to Do: Do SFX and Score (maybe think about eye blinks?)
Check out My Clock Cookbook Recipe: http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 51&t=21978

User avatar
Zylinder
Veteran
Posts: 320
Joined: Sat May 07, 2011 4:30 am
Contact:

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#7247 Post by Zylinder »

Some stuff I've been working on recently. Trying to get a workflow out that can be used on multiple styles ;_;

Image

Image

User avatar
King-sama
Veteran
Posts: 344
Joined: Thu Oct 03, 2013 9:38 am
Deviantart: Treepastry
Contact:

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#7248 Post by King-sama »

@zylinder:the second one look cool! 030

User avatar
SwedishJazz
Regular
Posts: 76
Joined: Sun Jul 12, 2015 9:21 pm
Tumblr: zeuswares
Location: Kraków, Poland
Contact:

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#7249 Post by SwedishJazz »

@Zylinder, I love these! The color schemes are very good, and I really dig the atmospehre in the first piece.

Here's a commission I finished the other night; I'm not quite satisfied with the contrast, but I do think it was a cute concept!
elephant prev.png
Image

User avatar
Lesleigh63
Miko-Class Veteran
Posts: 559
Joined: Fri May 31, 2013 7:59 pm
Completed: House of Dolls; Lads in Distress - Nano'16; Delusion Gallery Nano'18
Projects: BL VN
Deviantart: Lesleigh63
Contact:

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#7250 Post by Lesleigh63 »

@Zylinder - I love that colour variation on the buildings in the second one. So lovely.
@SwedishJazz - Very cute. Didn't notice the tree breaking until I looked at the larger size.

I'm still working on backgrounds.
I need to figure out how to paint foliage (I think I might need to use a brush that will give me a lot of dots, rather than the soft round brush I've been using.)
I softened my bridge painting - I felt it was too harsh on the eyes.
Attachments
bridge.jpg
park.jpg
Image

Assurevi
Newbie
Posts: 10
Joined: Fri Aug 28, 2015 6:46 pm
Contact:

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#7251 Post by Assurevi »

Hey guys, can you tell me how good this is?

It's my first time drawing/coloring on a character, since I don't have access to a tablet or a mouse I did this all with my touchpad.

It's not 100% done, but I was feeling kind of disappointed and want some opinions on whether or not I should give up :? .

I see so much good art so I thought you guys could help! Don't sugarcoat it, just tell me if it's good :D

Image

User avatar
trooper6
Lemma-Class Veteran
Posts: 3712
Joined: Sat Jul 09, 2011 10:33 pm
Projects: A Close Shave
Location: Medford, MA
Contact:

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#7252 Post by trooper6 »

Assurevi wrote: It's not 100% done, but I was feeling kind of disappointed and want some opinions on whether or not I should give up :? .
If something is important to you, never give up.
A Close Shave:
*Last Thing Done (Aug 17): Finished coding emotions and camera for 4/10 main labels.
*Currently Doing: Coding of emotions and camera for the labels--On 5/10
*First Next thing to do: Code in all CG and special animation stuff
*Next Next thing to do: Set up film animation
*Other Thing to Do: Do SFX and Score (maybe think about eye blinks?)
Check out My Clock Cookbook Recipe: http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 51&t=21978

Alix
Newbie
Posts: 12
Joined: Fri Aug 21, 2015 8:15 pm
Contact:

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#7253 Post by Alix »

Assurevi wrote:Hey guys, can you tell me how good this is?

It's my first time drawing/coloring on a character, since I don't have access to a tablet or a mouse I did this all with my touchpad.
For a first attempt, and being done with a touchpad, I think it's very good. But the fact that you aren't happy with it is also a good sign for your potential as an artist. Being able to see flaws in your own work is a prerequisite for improvement. Yes, it sucks to look at your art and see that it's not as good as you want it to be. But that's where everyone who ends up making good art has to start.

User avatar
Lesleigh63
Miko-Class Veteran
Posts: 559
Joined: Fri May 31, 2013 7:59 pm
Completed: House of Dolls; Lads in Distress - Nano'16; Delusion Gallery Nano'18
Projects: BL VN
Deviantart: Lesleigh63
Contact:

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#7254 Post by Lesleigh63 »

Assurevi wrote:Hey guys, can you tell me how good this is?

It's not 100% done, but I was feeling kind of disappointed and want some opinions on whether or not I should give up :? .


I think the face is very cute and that's the part that is the most finished I expect.
If you like doing art then don't give up. (I find painting disappointing in the initial stages [looks kinda hideous after the blocking in stage] but then it looks better as the details go in and things get smoothed out)
You could try drawing the body without clothes first - helps with anatomy.
Image

User avatar
Ehluuse
Newbie
Posts: 2
Joined: Mon Jan 12, 2015 8:24 pm
Completed: --
Projects: --
Location: Philippines
Contact:

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#7255 Post by Ehluuse »

Hi guys!
This is my first art dump! Omg. Well this is, I guess my very first successful male that I've ever created. Haha. This was made last March I think, after many practice, I managed to create one that is directly to what I really want to be on the output.
Hope you like it! :D

Image

Check my deviantart! :D http://lasagna-chan.deviantart.com/

Assurevi
Newbie
Posts: 10
Joined: Fri Aug 28, 2015 6:46 pm
Contact:

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#7256 Post by Assurevi »

@Everyone, thanks alot guys! I've completed the character and could post her if anyone wants!

@Ehluuse, that looks really nice, the colors are cool and fit the character's design in my opinion.

User avatar
ofdawnandtwilight
Miko-Class Veteran
Posts: 530
Joined: Sat Nov 13, 2010 1:50 am
Location: Malaysia
Contact:

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#7257 Post by ofdawnandtwilight »

@ Ehluuse: Thanks for dumping, he looks gorgeous! I wholeheartedly admire and salute to people who can paint, you guys are so friggin awesome.

@ Assurevi: Shhhh friend, I know how you feel but never give up, okay? I know that not everyone likes hearing this but practice really is the main key (with attentive observation along the way) and I promise that you'll see improvement, whether big or small depending on how much you're using your time to learn. Some people become pros in 2 years, some take much longer and it is never, by all means, never too late to learn and improve.



This was mine from about 5 years ago:
Image



And this is mine, still in progress (which I really need to finish soon, I'm taking way too long on it gdi):
Image




So don't beat yourself over it, keep posting here and take people's feedback to heart, everyone here gives splendid advice and are sincere in helping just like they were with me, and still do of course. Keep up the good work, friend! :>

User avatar
Didules
Veteran
Posts: 417
Joined: Thu May 09, 2013 6:34 am
Completed: Sophie, Midnight's Café, The Phantom of the Hospital
Projects: SchizoValentine
Organization: Hidden Masquerade
Tumblr: hidden-masquerade
Location: Somewhere on the map
Contact:

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#7258 Post by Didules »

Warming up before actual drawing... Lineless is nice....and less work.
Attachments
Time to lose here~
Time to lose here~

User avatar
Shinoki
Veteran
Posts: 289
Joined: Sun Feb 16, 2014 10:12 pm
Completed: tender feelings like water, Follower A, Moon Archer Shooting Stars, Heart's Blight, from that moment she neglected the world
Projects: Pomegranate Fruit
itch: 4noki
Contact:

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#7259 Post by Shinoki »

Eh, I need to work on the balance of my doodles. On the other hand, chibis are fun to draw. And for the first attempt at drawing guys in over two months, this isn't that bad.
Attachments
006.JPG
008.JPG
001.JPG

User avatar
Laluune
Regular
Posts: 39
Joined: Sun May 17, 2015 12:27 am
Contact:

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#7260 Post by Laluune »

Been pretty slack lately, no motivation whatsoever >.> I've been drawing cartoony for awhile so I needed to do something different :)
Attachments
11988561_10154231755774251_3839123843213483134_n.jpg
12003144_10154228933004251_8027687861103008649_n.jpg

Post Reply

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users