Hmm, the shading on the hair is not quite there for me yet. Since her hair has a smooth texture, I would expect it to have sharper highlights, especially where the light hits the crown of her head and on her waves. Hair has physical volume, so you want to make sure you're using your light and shadow to really "sculpt" it. Here's a few tutorials I pulled up on DeviantArt to show what I mean...Sayumi101 wrote:Pointers would be much appreciated, thank you.
http://taho.deviantart.com/art/Color-Tu ... -368926668
http://nyuhatter.deviantart.com/art/Ani ... -215806297
http://ryky.deviantart.com/art/How-to-d ... -568446916
Looking good so far though!