Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

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#7546 Post by Ryuushiro » Sat Aug 20, 2016 9:42 am

There are so many beautiful drawings on this thread!!! <3 You all are an inspiration!


D-don't mind me, I'm just posting some sketches and wips that I had done for fun but that will probably never be finished - v - '


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#7547 Post by Sayuui » Sat Aug 20, 2016 4:50 pm

Ryuushiro wrote:There are so many beautiful drawings on this thread!!! <3 You all are an inspiration!


D-don't mind me, I'm just posting some sketches and wips that I had done for fun but that will probably never be finished - v - '


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I love the girl on the beach sketch, it's so pretty!! <3333
Please finish it! <3333
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#7548 Post by fleet » Sat Aug 20, 2016 7:40 pm

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#7549 Post by Periwinkle » Sun Aug 21, 2016 6:39 pm

Critique is appreciated.
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#7550 Post by EkanubaTheKittyCat » Mon Aug 22, 2016 6:01 pm

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#7551 Post by camisteja » Mon Aug 22, 2016 7:33 pm

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#7552 Post by Aviala » Tue Aug 23, 2016 4:43 am

Periwinkle wrote:Critique is appreciated.
Hey there! I have a few pointers for you.

-The character is leaning too much to the left. Flip your canvas horizontally every now and then to notice things like this.
-The hair looks nice, it has good volume. Good job!
-The neck needs more structure - the curve is too soft. The head should connect to the neck near the back of the skull, cutting and pasting the head a bit to the right would help.
-The hand doesn't have joints so the fingers look a bit sausage-y. Take a look at reference photos of hands or look at your own hands (or snap a photo of your hand in the right pose).
-The collar of the shirt/cape/whatever looks great on the right (nice volume) but flat and wrong on the left because all of the lines meet at the point where the line of the neck starts. Just do the same thing on the left as you did on the right and you're golden.
-The facial features look a bit wonky. Drawing a cross on the face will help you keep things symmetrical. The mouth is too close to the chin. Flipping the canvas will help you here too.
-Make sure you draw the whole skull and body before you add clothes, hair or facial features. This will help you get the anatomy right.
-Overall the body proportions look pretty good since you're going for an anime inspired style.

I drew a sketch to help you understand. You're already doing really well, just keep practising and you'll improve fast. :-) Good luck!
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#7553 Post by truefaiterman » Tue Aug 23, 2016 6:57 am

I was waiting to finish the whole painting, but due to work I'm not sure if I'll finish it soon enough, sooo... sneak peak!

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#7554 Post by camisteja » Tue Aug 23, 2016 12:41 pm

truefaiterman wrote:I was waiting to finish the whole painting, but due to work I'm not sure if I'll finish it soon enough, sooo... sneak peak!
To me, everything looks great except for the teeth. If you're going to put any kind of detail in the teeth, you might want to make sure to get the size right. Otherwise she looks like she has slabs of stone in her mouth or something... Remember that not all teeth are the same size!

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#7555 Post by Ryuushiro » Tue Aug 23, 2016 12:55 pm

Sayuui wrote:
I love the girl on the beach sketch, it's so pretty!! <3333
Please finish it! <3333
Thank you!!! ;u; Glad you liked it! I might finish it if I manage to get some free time...


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#7556 Post by truefaiterman » Thu Aug 25, 2016 3:13 pm

camisteja wrote:
truefaiterman wrote:I was waiting to finish the whole painting, but due to work I'm not sure if I'll finish it soon enough, sooo... sneak peak!
To me, everything looks great except for the teeth. If you're going to put any kind of detail in the teeth, you might want to make sure to get the size right. Otherwise she looks like she has slabs of stone in her mouth or something... Remember that not all teeth are the same size!
You're right! I wanted to go for a relatively cartoony expression, and ended up messing the proportions on the mouth. Thanks a lot!

With that said... I finally finished it!

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#7557 Post by WilliamofBangor » Mon Aug 29, 2016 12:55 pm

I'm not an illustrator, but I've experimented a little with photographs in Photoshop to create backgrounds. I either use stock images or my own photos. I'm not sure if they are quite up to par, but I'm new to VN creation and thought that I could at least use them for my own practice.

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#7558 Post by Aviala » Mon Aug 29, 2016 2:31 pm

WilliamofBangor wrote:I'm not an illustrator, but I've experimented a little with photographs in Photoshop to create backgrounds. I either use stock images or my own photos. I'm not sure if they are quite up to par]
Looking good! I think those will work well in free projects, but maybe not in professional commercial ones.

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#7559 Post by Abuelitaland » Wed Aug 31, 2016 4:07 pm

Sprite style drawing for client on FA :3c so cute... i love doin these!
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#7560 Post by nue-tella » Fri Sep 02, 2016 10:17 am

Some Yume Nikki fanart I finished yesterday ^^ I actually kinda like how it turned out for once
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