Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#7591 Post by Anne » Tue Oct 18, 2016 7:53 pm

Hoyuu No, I don't think they clash. The textbox does look a little bit different because it doesn't have rounded angles like the screens do and because of the cityscape background that I don't see used anywhere else, maybe you could make it a bit more subtle, that'll probably help text readability as well.

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#7592 Post by King-sama » Thu Oct 20, 2016 12:19 am

Beautiful Glitch wrote:Image

This is one of our love interests, Vera Oberlin. We're trying to add some animation loop to the design, to improve the production value of the game! (:
I liked it! 8O nice drawing style~
Does the character has green skin??

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#7593 Post by bunnyvoid » Sat Oct 22, 2016 12:04 pm

First time here! (tell me if I'm doing something wrong. OTL)

Butler Commission Sprites Inks Dump
with JACKET
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with BLAISER
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EXPRESSION chart samples
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now gonna try some colors. i hope i get it right...

btw, the snake lady loooks amaaaazing.
really strong vibe. solid character design.
also, colors are simple but neat.

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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#7594 Post by OokamiKasumi » Sat Oct 22, 2016 3:32 pm

bunnyvoid wrote:First time here! (tell me if I'm doing something wrong. OTL)

Butler Commission Sprites Inks Dump
with JACKET
...
with BLAISER
...
EXPRESSION chart samples
...
now gonna try some colors. i hope i get it right...
I love the array of expressions and the arm movements!
-- However, you might want to do a little more research on the uniform. I realize things are a bit different between the Victorian era and the Modern era, but no butler of any era would allow visible Wrinkles in his uniform.
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For an excellent example of what a butler wears, and what they actually do, watch a few episodes of "Downton Abbey".
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#7595 Post by bunnyvoid » Sun Oct 23, 2016 3:51 am

@Ookami,

oohhhh Thanks!
great info. glad i posted here before i did the colors :)

also thanks for that refs and recommendation :D

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#7596 Post by bilibala » Sun Oct 23, 2016 10:05 am

I have been learning Cubism Live2D lately. Seems it would work great with VN, though I'm not sure if Ren'py support atm.

First model ever made.
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here are some videos of a more recent one which I upload to FaceRig's Steam Workshop





Here's one that I'm working, inside Cubism editor


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FaceRig expression demo



Hopefully I can get some commission work to cover the cost of the editor in the future lol.
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#7597 Post by CSV » Sun Oct 23, 2016 3:56 pm

I have finally made a decent attempt at creating VN sprites using traditional media - a ballpoint pen in this case. Here are the results, with a filtered public domain image for a background. I think they look okay? And there are expression variations too. :D I posted some here, if anyone wants to see them.

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#7598 Post by bunnyvoid » Sun Oct 23, 2016 9:18 pm

@bilibata, always good to see some live 2d examples :) cool stuff.
@CSV, wow that style really went well. i amazed (inspired even). Really goes well together

another work in progress photo for the butler project i'm working on.
it's for an app.

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#7599 Post by tirius99 » Tue Oct 25, 2016 3:09 am

These are some of the fanarts I drew. I want to get better at drawing so I can create a visual novel. I would love to work on a project so I can push myself and create original characters but don't know how to get on a project. Any positive critique would be welcome
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#7600 Post by AnastasiaMorning » Tue Oct 25, 2016 5:42 am

Hi folks! I'm new here and just wanted to say hello.
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#7601 Post by UkiTheMaid » Tue Oct 25, 2016 3:34 pm

Did u guys say art??

Well, I'm not going to dump all my art here because honestly, you guys don't need to go through all my art story lol

BUT, I'm going to upload here a full version of the icon I'm using, because it's one of the art things I'm the most proud recently! And reflects well how my art has improved!

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#7602 Post by Limabaen » Sat Oct 29, 2016 4:18 am

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5 months improvement :D
Left side is unfinished though

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#7603 Post by ofdawnandtwilight » Sat Oct 29, 2016 7:56 am

@ Limabaen: Oooooh your improved colouring is niiiiiice, I love it! Definitely heading towards the professional style. Do you happen to be learning/imitating a specific artist's style?

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Also I've been experimenting more colouring as stress relief??? owo (The kid's supposed to be smirking saying 'Bang!' though lmao)

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#7604 Post by UkiTheMaid » Sat Oct 29, 2016 6:54 pm

@ofdawnandtwilight Woooooah!!! I love your style!! *_* That experimenting with colors is going great!!

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#7605 Post by ofdawnandtwilight » Mon Oct 31, 2016 1:49 pm

@ UkiTheMaid: Thank you thank you! <3 I like your art style as well, it's super cute!

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