Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#7651 Post by Hijiri » Sun Jan 29, 2017 2:49 am

LateWhiteRabbit wrote:
Hijiri wrote:Not regular art related, but decided to put all (non-lazy) versions of DR's logo together. I guess this shows that even with something like graphic design, we improve over time.
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On another note, it seems I've always favored the red color scheme for the main title and a blue color for the subtitle (The first attempt being an outlier).
I feel I should tell you this as, hopefully, a forum friend - your third attempt is the best. All the ones after that lose legibility and thus, impact, because they are hard to read - never good for a logo! I like the font better in your latest logo, but the way you have colored it makes it very hard to read.
Huh, good to know. I'll be honest, since I'm the only one in a group of friends who does this sorta thing I sorta have to figure out changes myself. I'll tweak things some more.
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#7652 Post by LeonDaydreamer » Mon Jan 30, 2017 7:10 pm

morinoir wrote:I vote for pokemon!
Haha, thanks! I like the Pokemon one best, too. :)
I lifted it from a Pokemon parody I made for a comic a long time ago - Pouchmon!

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#7653 Post by Dark Sentinel » Tue Jan 31, 2017 10:17 am

Probably I should go for personal art thread here or there, but I'm not ready yet. Not enough ready.
Shadows and cloth wrinkles (and well, who am I going to lie to, anatomy as well) are still REALLY BIG PAIN, CURSES, but oh well, still way better than before.
Also my first ever sprite in 3/4.
I'll proudly call it "Dark's Sprite v3.0".
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#7654 Post by CSV » Tue Jan 31, 2017 2:14 pm

So Katta has probably forgotten this by now, but I was her Lemmasoft Secret Santa in 2015 and drew an humanoid alien as her gift, and said I would make a space otome eventually. Now "eventually" has come, and I wanted to show off this GUI and the alien love interest's sprite I made!.
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I wanted it to look like a retro adventure game, hence those colors and pixel art.
PS: The laboratory image is a heavily edited version of a background from this resource website.

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#7655 Post by Hoyuu » Tue Jan 31, 2017 6:29 pm

@CSV: I really like pixel art, and your drawing is----- so good?? I don't really have the patience to shade pixel, so kudos to you, and I really liked his expression too.

Hey guys, its been a while.
My computer crashed and I lost a lot of my drawings, including a creative commons sprite I was doing (luckly I didn't really lost anything related to my VN, but still), so I lost my motivation to draw for a while.... Until Yuri on Ice xD
Anyway, it's been a while since I drew anything, so I did this sketch today and I can't help but think there is something off about the anatomy, specially the arms.
Here's the drawing:
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made some quick edits--
Like I said, I feel as if there's something off about the anatomy, and since I plan to line and color it, I would be forever grateful if someone could redline my drawing for me. Seriously, I would love you forever ;w;

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#7656 Post by Tempus » Sat Feb 04, 2017 5:06 am

WIP background I'm making:

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#7657 Post by SexBomb » Sat Feb 04, 2017 7:02 am

Hoyuu wrote:Like I said, I feel as if there's something off about the anatomy, and since I plan to line and color it, I would be forever grateful if someone could redline my drawing for me. Seriously, I would love you forever ;w;
Unfortunately I'm a little too busy this week to redline for you, but the thing that strikes me immediately is that the forearm looks a little too short in relation to the upper arm. That, and I feel the index finger might be just a little too short and stiff. Finally, try fixing the cuff of the gloves; they look a little awkward, as if they don't fit properly around the forearm. Hopefully this helps... sorry I'm not able to redline it for you! Best of luck!

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#7658 Post by Runes » Sun Feb 05, 2017 5:22 pm

Hey there, this is just a mockup of an Eroge we started but had to put on pause.
The Background and the Sprite are done by me. (°^-^ )
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#7659 Post by YuukiCrossPudding » Tue Feb 07, 2017 11:08 am

Something I made for practice, plan to upload this with various expressions later
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#7660 Post by Hoyuu » Tue Feb 07, 2017 4:48 pm

@SexBomb: Ahh, thank you, even if you didn't have the time to redline I took note of the things you said and managed to fix them, at least somewhat, I think. Specially the cuff thing, really didn't notice until it was pointed out :,D
Again, thanks for taking the time to point out my mistakes, I'm grateful.

Here's the finished lineart:
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@YuukiCrossPudding: She's cute! I really liked the lineart, and the folds...! One day I'll learn to draw folds decently, one day :,D

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#7661 Post by YuukiCrossPudding » Thu Feb 09, 2017 7:26 am

Hoyuu wrote: Here's the finished lineart:
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@YuukiCrossPudding: She's cute! I really liked the lineart, and the folds...! One day I'll learn to draw folds decently, one day :,D
Thank you! That's actually my old sketch :lol: but I did a recycle and clean it up a bit so it'll be decent for me to color.
:cry: I still can't draw folds decently too, let's improve together!

You should check this thread out then : viewtopic.php?f=46&t=14980
there are tutorials on how to draw clothes folds and such too!

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#7662 Post by Hoyuu » Sat Feb 11, 2017 12:34 pm

@YuukiCrossPudding: Those tutorials seems to be pretty useful actually, thank your for pointing them out!

I've been drawing a lot lately, all thanks to Yuri on Ice :,D
Here's another WIP that I'm working on:
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I've never ever drawn anything besides people before, can you tell I had no ideia about wtf I was doing when I drew that throne? :'D
I also feel that the floor's perspective is kinda off, but hopefully it won't be too difficult to fix :,D

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#7663 Post by charliesan763 » Sun Feb 12, 2017 8:34 pm

In making my firts VN with a friend that is writing it. This are the first sketches/doodles of the characters, I know there are mistakes anywhere :lol: I just use the doodles to see something while writing the script :) I just felt like sharing my stuff after all the great art I saw here :o Final versions coming soon! :D
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#7664 Post by Bladewild » Wed Feb 15, 2017 11:36 pm

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#7665 Post by EkanubaTheKittyCat » Sat Feb 18, 2017 2:14 pm

Sprite redraw in progress
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