Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#1171 Post by sake-bento » Mon Apr 07, 2008 10:40 am

Cy, the elven girl's expression is really cute, and the tie makes her look very classy. I think for the background, everything is a bit too far away. It makes the room look huge when (I think?) recording studios are a lot smaller.

ChuugokuNOSanbutsu, I like her eyepatch. The first thing I thought when I saw her was Nina from Elfen Lied. ^_^;; Looks like it's gonna be a fascinating game. ::nodnod::

monele, daang, those are some nice meganeko. I prefer long haired girls, but for some reason the one of the right looks more like my type. XD

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#1172 Post by yummy » Tue Apr 08, 2008 9:43 am

Waah Monele! Where's the whole schoolgirl uniform ? =D
You're sure drawing better and better ^^

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#1173 Post by monele » Tue Apr 08, 2008 10:30 am

Aah, arigatou ^^;. There's no whole uniform because I just wanted something generic and only drew a random top gathered from various pictures. I might make full body pictures if the RP goes on for long enough ^^.

In the mean time, a new character has appeared!

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#1174 Post by Mirena » Tue Apr 08, 2008 10:35 am

Sapphire Dragon: Nice work, I like it.

uluu: I really like the concept of the character (and the dress is pretty!). You ought to add some texture/shadows to the plants though.

Eccentrix: Cool picture. Did you make the background as well?

Edit: Monele, that newest character looks really cute, with her face, how she holds her hands and all.

Here's something I drew. As always I'd appreciate feedback.

Link: http://alet-maon.deviantart.com/art/Valkyrie-82237856

Umm. Sorry for the big text, but most of you guys seem immune to links. ._.

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#1175 Post by renkenjutsu » Wed Apr 09, 2008 12:26 am

Mirena, that's a cute piccy :3. I never even thought to draw a Valkyrie that moe xD.
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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#1176 Post by Guest » Wed Apr 09, 2008 3:20 pm

Title: Not In My Notebook: Underneath The Rain
Selling Price: $99,999,999 (per print)
Original Sketch: Kikered
CG: Anon

A truly avante-garde work of the highest order. A touching depiction of kindness underneath the harshness of rainfall. The soft, dull, lifeless shades help to accentuate the over-all melancholic mood of this modern-day masterpiece. The lines are smooth yet untamed - retaining their primitive, instinctive appeal from the original artist's sketch. This picture subliminally brings forth many questions to the viewer's mind. Who are the characters? Are they lovers? Is this a gentleman displaying kindness towards someone of lower rank? The fact that they will remain unanswered, only adds to the mysterious beauty of this enchanting artwork.

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#1177 Post by Nebi » Thu Apr 10, 2008 12:33 am

Title: Not In My Notebook: Underneath The Rain
Not too shabby. I would not pay the asking price, but the artist did a good job. For example, note the details such as the volume and splatter of rain drops; the diagonal gradient; the soft shadows on the ground; consistent proportions overall; correct number of digits on hands and feet; direction of the eyes...

The postures are a little stiff, but a lot of things were covered!

Keep up the good work~

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#1178 Post by bloodywyvern » Thu Apr 10, 2008 3:03 am

Guest wrote:Selling Price: $99,999,999 (per print)
T-t-that's it!? For such a spectacular marvel, it certainly beats most art these days! Well, the experimental ones at least....

Haha, in all seriousness I find it to have a certain simplicity to it. That simplicity seems to give a certain depth that would under normal circumstances, probably not be seen.
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#1179 Post by Samu-kun » Thu Apr 10, 2008 3:09 am

The only thing I see is that the girl has one helluva short skirt. ^_^

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#1180 Post by yummy » Thu Apr 10, 2008 7:06 pm

Samu-kun wrote:The only thing I see is that the girl has one helluva short skirt. ^_^
Maybe... She's got none?! :shock:
So what's this guy doing? :oops:

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#1181 Post by bloodywyvern » Thu Apr 10, 2008 7:21 pm

yummy wrote: Maybe... She's got none?! :shock:
So what's this guy doing? :oops:
He's bringing home a new toy :lol:
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#1182 Post by Guessmyname » Fri Apr 11, 2008 3:10 pm

Note: Both of these were drawn at the same resolution shown, which was a bit thick of me (especially for the first one: the small size resulted in a considerable loss/inability to draw of intended detail)

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#1183 Post by azureXtwilight » Sat Apr 12, 2008 11:06 am

Here.... He can be an antagonist or protagonist... Tee...hee....hee :twisted:
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#1184 Post by Cybeat » Sun Apr 13, 2008 1:22 pm

Attention, my happy ren'py people. I would like to know from many users. Does this girl look like a mother or a sister? I need to know because she's a part of my game Mujinchitai. She kinda reminds me of Flonne.
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#1185 Post by Hime » Sun Apr 13, 2008 1:29 pm

I think she's your best one so far, the contrast is nicely soft. I think she looks like a sister/mother too... ^^ As a sister, I'd rather have her as my big sister than my little sister.
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