Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

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#1186 Post by Cybeat » Sun Apr 13, 2008 1:32 pm

This could be the best. The proportion is right this time. I think seeing her as a big sister would be better. She was suppose to look like a mother.
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#1187 Post by akemicchi » Sun Apr 13, 2008 1:49 pm

I vote sister, too! She looks too young to be a mother (unless she's a new mom?). ^^; I think it's mostly due to her clothes; they look like overalls, and those tend to make you seem younger.

Her shoulders seem stiff, but even then it certainly does look like your best yet! :D The colors and shadings are great, and she's really, really cute.


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#1188 Post by Cybeat » Sun Apr 13, 2008 2:40 pm

Thanks. Most of the credit goes to my partner, not all at me.
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#1189 Post by monele » Sun Apr 13, 2008 3:07 pm

I agree, she's either an onee-san or a rather young mother :)

EDIT : oop~ new stuff ^^

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#1190 Post by uluuu » Sun Apr 13, 2008 7:13 pm

Wheeee, group shot of main characters from my game~
I AM ERRORS! D8
At least I am improving... little... by... very little...? I wonder how easy it is to tell which one I did first?
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#1191 Post by monele » Mon Apr 14, 2008 3:26 am

Wai~ they're really cute ^_^. I love the more pastel colors... so soft!

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#1192 Post by Guessmyname » Mon Apr 14, 2008 4:07 am

Yeah. The only problem is that they all seem to be leaning backwards a bit. Easily fixed though: just rotate them so they stand upright.
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#1193 Post by bloodywyvern » Mon Apr 14, 2008 4:24 am

Well they might all just be in the middle of dramatic fall! ^_^ Regardless, very nice.
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#1194 Post by uluuu » Mon Apr 14, 2008 11:52 am

Thanks~ I thrive on commentsssss~ ::flail::
Yeah, I really need to work on anatomy and positioning and stuff before I make the actual sprites for the game, hehe.

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#1195 Post by blakjak » Mon Apr 14, 2008 2:27 pm

monele wrote:I agree, she's either an onee-san or a rather young mother :)

EDIT : oop~ new stuff ^^

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And a group picture of the Lyceenne RPG : http://monele.deviantart.com/art/Lyceen ... e-82729033
I love the chibi, I could adopt her :mrgreen:

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#1196 Post by blakjak » Mon Apr 14, 2008 2:28 pm

uluuu wrote:Wheeee, group shot of main characters from my game~
I AM ERRORS! D8
At least I am improving... little... by... very little...? I wonder how easy it is to tell which one I did first?
there are some minor problems of anatomycal symmetry, but really, this is very good stuff.

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#1197 Post by monele » Mon Apr 14, 2008 3:16 pm

blakjak wrote:I love the chibi, I could adopt her :mrgreen:
Thanks! But don't leave the cookies unattended then ;)

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#1198 Post by blakjak » Mon Apr 14, 2008 3:31 pm

:mrgreen:

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#1199 Post by Cybeat » Tue Apr 15, 2008 11:43 am

Here's my concept art for BloodyWyvern's R.E.M: Reality's Dream. I think she's fairly good looking.
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#1200 Post by monele » Tue Apr 15, 2008 1:48 pm

Nice meido ^_^. She doesn't look like one you want to piss off ^^;

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