Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#7831 Post by Trafagal » Tue May 19, 2020 8:43 pm

Saikono wrote:
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Hi,
I really like the anatomy and design of your character, your background looks really cool. It makes me wonder how do you create it. I wonder is this character for a game? :)

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#7832 Post by Saikono » Sat May 23, 2020 1:48 pm

Hi!
Thanks! Yes, this is a character for my canceled novel.
Well, I draw simply and that's it. I am a pro artist. :D

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#7833 Post by Saikono » Sat May 23, 2020 2:03 pm

character design
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#7834 Post by little bear » Sun May 31, 2020 11:10 pm

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Something i drew last month.
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#7835 Post by anonymouse » Thu Jun 04, 2020 7:18 pm

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I know drawn art is the usual style around here, but I wonder if you like my character line up? It is 3d rendered with significant post work.

Do you like the style?
How old do they look?
Any other comments?

Please and thank you! :D

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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#7836 Post by SelLi » Sat Jun 06, 2020 2:16 am

anonymouse wrote:
Thu Jun 04, 2020 7:18 pm
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I know drawn art is the usual style around here, but I wonder if you like my character line up? It is 3d rendered with significant post work.

Do you like the style?
How old do they look?
Any other comments?

Please and thank you! :D
3D is quite a different medium than 2D and it's one that can easily look somehow uncanny. I don't know if my opinion on these very realistic 3D models will be of much help... but for what it's worth, I like how the girl on the near right looks. You did a good job expressing the characters through body-language and facial expressions. I could see some people finding some of the facial expressions a bit creepy/crazy-looking, but I think you expressed their emotions well and I don't know how one would express those emotions without potentially making the faces look "weird" to some people. You also did a good job in making the girl with the heart on her shorts look fun. I think they all in all look good for what that's worth. ^^

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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#7837 Post by SelLi » Sat Jun 06, 2020 2:29 am

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Could I perhaps get some opinions on this piece? What do you think of it?

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#7838 Post by anonymouse » Sun Jun 07, 2020 12:35 am

She looks like... an angel. :D

Her hair (where it flows down her back) has an wing-like quality that I think adds to the angelic look.

Her hands look too big.

Is she standing on a pedestal? The white part under her dress kind of looks like a marble pedestal to me.

The pink 'ribbon' down the front of her dress looks like it's pulling down on her collar.

She's cute.

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#7839 Post by Inksword » Sun Jun 07, 2020 3:41 am

Playing around with a potential simpler style for sprites, not quite happy with the anatomy on this but it's not for anything so eh.

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#7840 Post by anonymouse » Wed Jun 17, 2020 5:07 pm

I think the hips and legs look good. Something about the shape of the torso looks off. I think the biggest problem is in the shoulders and head. The arms seem to connect to the body unnaturally, and I think the head is too small. Just my unprofessional opinion! I like the subject, and it's better than I could do. :)

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#7841 Post by chellophane » Sun Jun 21, 2020 6:07 pm

some fanart but it's the most recent piece i've worked on !

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i was redredswap!!!!!!

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#7842 Post by Trafagal » Sat Jun 27, 2020 5:44 am

chellophane wrote:
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some fanart but it's the most recent piece i've worked on !

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They look beautiful.

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#7843 Post by Saikono » Mon Jul 06, 2020 2:35 pm

bamp. fan art
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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#7844 Post by SinaAzad » Tue Jul 07, 2020 5:38 am

Saikono wrote:
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bamp. fan art
hey cool art, was going to check your DA but the link is incomplete... any Instagram or Twitter accounts? I kinda Hate DA...
I am very proud to be a part of this generous, nice and friendly community!
but please, don't go around telling people that their work is somehow off! thats not how critique works!
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