Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

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#1786 Post by haloheroine »

Ooh~
Art dumpage thread...
Well... This pic is a character in my short VN based off my WIP manga, Cream-Punk. ^^'
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#1787 Post by mugenjohncel »

Under heavy stress and influence of Alcohol I decided to sketch...
something on a piece of scratch paper and was impressed by what
I have created... scanned it and colored it on Photoshop using laptop's
touchpad for maximum enjoyment... it's fun doing it especially if the world
is spinning without me...

Moral lesson: Don't Drink while Drawing... Really, it's such a bad idea...

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#1788 Post by Sakurazaki »

Looks horrible, and unfinished but...

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#1789 Post by azureXtwilight »

Just a crappy pic I made at lunch break... XD
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#1790 Post by LVUER »

Ooooh, so cute ^_^
I like it.

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#1791 Post by risingbamboobanana »

*delurks*

LOL mugen XD that's awesome.

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#1792 Post by N0UGHTS »

Did you do the line art, or just the coloring?

Wow... Nice coloring... But his legs look a bit small. And it's not because he's a low-rider (it seems)--cover up his waist and compare this legs to his torso... It's a bit off....
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#1793 Post by risingbamboobanana »

i did both :) i can post the sketch (if you want)

i did think his legs looked a bit strange, but i couldn't quite pin it down exactly. thanks for pointing that out :D
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#1794 Post by LVUER »

It seems strange because the anatomy is wrong (starts from waist below). The leg is too short, making him like gorilla. I don't know what you call it, but I think the waist is too small/shallow. Also the legs' anatomy aren't balanced between left and right leg.

The shadow/shading is also a little bit strange. Let's say that I can't pinpoint where the light's coming from.

I'm not a great artist myself. But at least to me, that's where the problem lies.

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#1795 Post by bowling pin »

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#1796 Post by Doomfest »

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Dysfunctional Systems
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[02:49] <Komi> How is Dysfunctional Systems coming along?
[02:52] <Doomfest> have you seen prince of egypt
[02:53] <Doomfest> do you remember that scene with the storm of bugs
[02:54] <Komi> I know what you are talking about, but I can't remember the scene.
[02:54] <Doomfest> that is what it feels like
[02:55] <Komi> Personality conflicts on the team, I take it?
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#1797 Post by azureXtwilight »

Whoa, it's so pretty! Loved your art, doomfest!
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#1798 Post by Doomfest »

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Dysfunctional Systems
Juniper's Knot
Cradle Song, a visual novel in development
Memo, a visual novel

[02:49] <Komi> How is Dysfunctional Systems coming along?
[02:52] <Doomfest> have you seen prince of egypt
[02:53] <Doomfest> do you remember that scene with the storm of bugs
[02:54] <Komi> I know what you are talking about, but I can't remember the scene.
[02:54] <Doomfest> that is what it feels like
[02:55] <Komi> Personality conflicts on the team, I take it?
[02:56] <Doomfest> no
[02:56] <Doomfest> just bugs
[02:56] <Doomfest> storm of bugs

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#1799 Post by mugenjohncel »

Ahh... It's been a while... Another addition to my Dead Touhou Girls Series...

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#1800 Post by redcat »

.... :oops:
uhm....so many talented artist here...
I wonder if I can catch-up with you all....

Here's my recent sketch, made with mechanical pencil (and a little touch with photoshop)
Bad drawing, isnt it? :D I hope you like my loli-style...
Critics are very welcome... :)

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Meowwngg...??

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