Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
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First full sprite on my tablet...not sure it turned out good.
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It's been a long time since I made my last avatar so I think it's time to make a new avatar... and this time, it's animated >_< yeah!
I want to make this as my DA avatar too, unfortunately, not only it must be 50x50px (which not), it also must be smaller than 15KB (which no matter how much I tried, I only managed to bring it down to 22KB). So I guess I must make another avatar for DA.
BTW, anyone could guess what show I tried to mimic here? (Is mimic a right word? Should I use parody or homage instead?)... And could anyone guess what's the meaning of the three number (1-4-3)?
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As usual, if you're interested in the higher resolution version, you could download it from my DA account.
I want to make this as my DA avatar too, unfortunately, not only it must be 50x50px (which not), it also must be smaller than 15KB (which no matter how much I tried, I only managed to bring it down to 22KB). So I guess I must make another avatar for DA.
BTW, anyone could guess what show I tried to mimic here? (Is mimic a right word? Should I use parody or homage instead?)... And could anyone guess what's the meaning of the three number (1-4-3)?
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As usual, if you're interested in the higher resolution version, you could download it from my DA account.
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I can not begin to guess what you are trying to mimic (yes that's the right word to use). Power rangers?
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I think it's Kamen Rider?
But nice animation, Lvuer. It's pretty smooth and flows very well.
@pkt: I like it, it's got a soft feeling to it. But the shading can be more defined(mostly on the hair), and the shoulder is slanted on one side. Is that intentional, like she's shrugging?
But nice animation, Lvuer. It's pretty smooth and flows very well.
@pkt: I like it, it's got a soft feeling to it. But the shading can be more defined(mostly on the hair), and the shoulder is slanted on one side. Is that intentional, like she's shrugging?
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I didn't line it up is my excuse for the shoulder. Lines need to be better too. I might just vector next time instead.
What do you mean by soft though?
I didn't line it up is my excuse for the shoulder. Lines need to be better too. I might just vector next time instead.
What do you mean by soft though?
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@pkt:
Your picture is not balanced between left and right part. It doesn't have to be perfectly symmetrical, but your imbalance is anatomically wrong (unless your character is disfigured ^_^). Even the eye isn't balanced (common mistake for beginners, don't worry).
Also his cloth (and the body) is strange. Draw without cloth first.
Your picture is not balanced between left and right part. It doesn't have to be perfectly symmetrical, but your imbalance is anatomically wrong (unless your character is disfigured ^_^). Even the eye isn't balanced (common mistake for beginners, don't worry).
Also his cloth (and the body) is strange. Draw without cloth first.
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@ pkt: I meant that the picture looked soft because of the sketchy lines, or at least it looked softer to me because of the lines, that is.
@ azraillesama: The colors are great, very vibrant even in a night setting. One thing I see is the devil girl's right hand may be a little small? But I understand it's probably because of the angle, other than that it looks promising.
@ azraillesama: The colors are great, very vibrant even in a night setting. One thing I see is the devil girl's right hand may be a little small? But I understand it's probably because of the angle, other than that it looks promising.
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Looks good azraillesama, but like Nish said, the right hand seems too small. Also, the tiara looks kinda flat, it should be angled so it looks like she's wearing it, rather than just being placed on her head.
Shadowing is excellent, I love it. No complaints in that area.
The color flow is also nice. All the colors match to one another. Very good job.
And LUVER, just figured out that the 143 is I Love You. :]
Shadowing is excellent, I love it. No complaints in that area.
The color flow is also nice. All the colors match to one another. Very good job.
And LUVER, just figured out that the 143 is I Love You. :]
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Sorry, cloudyssky, but it's wrong. Now I'm curious, where does it come from? 1-4-3 = I Love You?
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another one of my change of pace aka sCRAP doodles.. meh...
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@ azraillesama
I liked the vibrant colors and general composition, good work overall.
* The left thigh of the right lady is too long. It also feels like something is wrong with its shape, but maybe that's just a result of the problematic length.
* The buildings outside the windows should be out of focus.
* The triangle at the end of the tail looks like a bad gradient filling. You probably should have put more time to it, since the wings' gradient looks nice.
I liked the vibrant colors and general composition, good work overall.
* The left thigh of the right lady is too long. It also feels like something is wrong with its shape, but maybe that's just a result of the problematic length.
* The buildings outside the windows should be out of focus.
* The triangle at the end of the tail looks like a bad gradient filling. You probably should have put more time to it, since the wings' gradient looks nice.
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