Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

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#796 Post by M12 »

Thanks Sakurazaki :3.
DaFool wrote:I thought the Moe Mobile was a real-life picture of your actual car for a while though...
Hm? What do you mean? That is a picture of my actual car =O... Every night, when a moe is in trouble, TDOMJ will come to the rescue...

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#797 Post by Vatina »

DaFool wrote:I thought the Moe Mobile was a real-life picture of your actual car for a while though...
Lol me too... took a while before I realized what it was :P

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#798 Post by Cybeat »

A character from my upcoming game.
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#799 Post by Deji »

Lineart for a part of a picture I'm working on.
I wish my hand drawn lines weren't as sloppy, so I wouldn't have to spend hours on cleaning them >_o;
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#800 Post by Cybeat »

Deji wrote:Lineart for a part of a picture I'm working on.
I wish my hand drawn lines weren't as sloppy, so I wouldn't have to spend hours on cleaning them >_o;
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At least it's cleaner than my drawing.
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#801 Post by Mirena »

Ooh Deji, it looks great! When you do lineart by hand, do you ink it and then scan?

I like your character as well, Cybeat, but I kind of think there should be some lines/shadow to indicate his arms.

Here are some of my wips/experiments. Opinions are very much appreciated, since lately I don't know what to do about my drawings..
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#802 Post by Cybeat »

Mirena wrote:Ooh Deji, it looks great! When you do lineart by hand, do you ink it and then scan?

I like your character as well, Cybeat, but I kind of think there should be some lines/shadow to indicate his arms.

Here are some of my wips/experiments. Opinions are very much appreciated, since lately I don't know what to do about my drawings..
I like the shades in your character's hair. I didn't master that technique yet. I forgot to draw line for my character's arm.
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#803 Post by sake-bento »

Wow, I wish my lineart looked as clean as the others here. >_< Coloring is so much easier for me than lineart. ^_^;;

Mirena, I get the feeling that you're a little bit wary about shading your characters, as if you'll add too much when you put the shadows in. The highlights are great (especially the hair), but I think the characters would have more depth if you were more liberal with your use of shadow, particularly on the skin.

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#804 Post by Cybeat »

I made some mistakes.
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#805 Post by akemicchi »

Deji, she's so cute! Her arms are a little long, considering the perspective and the angle of her hands, though. But besides that, it's so cute and pretty~ (.... Wait, that's 'sloppy'?!)

I agree with sake-bento about your use of shadows, Mirena. There should be more! For Wip1, the shadows should be more dramatic; they look really similar to the original base color, and so she looks really shiny.

Cybeat, I really like the Masayuki one. He's so cute. xD I like his eyes better than the recent one where you've outlined the whites of his eyes too. I really don't like the shading on Kid's jacket. I think it'd look better with harder shades like the ones on his collar and his hair. There's also some white space in the teeny spots- you should get rid of those.

Humm, here's my drawing. It's just a doodle, though-- I'm trying to figure out good color schemes and clothing designs for this character. Earthy/Autumn-ish colors seems really nice so far, but his clothing designs really need more work....
Arg, guys' clothes are so much harder to design than girls' because there are so many limits to what they can wear. ;-;
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#806 Post by Blue123 »

Cybeat wrote:A character from my upcoming game.
Kind of reminds me of Kunikida from TMOHS. It's probably the blue blazer. But nice drawing!

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#807 Post by Cybeat »

@ akemicchi:

Thanks. From now on, I won't outline eyes. I suck at shading.

@ Blue123:

I watched a small part of TMOHS, but I've never seen Kunikida. I looked him up. Yeah, my character does look like him....a bit.
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#808 Post by Mirena (lazy mode) »

Hmm.. thanks for the feedback and suggestions~ I'll be sure to take them into account!

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#809 Post by Sakurazaki »

Quick sketchie I did of one of the characters from one of R3's dumped projects, chibi form. I really liked the character too....D:
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#810 Post by Cybeat »

Here's a fast drawing. I used very little effort on the grass and the tree.
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