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[LeonDaydreamer]

The Wizard from Put A Sock In It!

[Yada]

New here, but just wanted to drop off some recent drawings, and ask for critique!

Not sure why the second photo is flipped, but that's actually the one I was hoping someone would be able to advise me on - how do I make the feet look more natural??

[Periwinkle]

Critique is appreciated.

Hey there! I have a few pointers for you.

-The character is leaning too much to the left. Flip your canvas horizontally every now and then to notice things like this.
-The hair looks nice, it has good volume. Good job!
-The neck needs more structure - the curve is too soft. The head should connect to the neck near the back of the skull, cutting and pasting the head a bit to the right would help.
-The hand doesn't have joints so the fingers look a bit sausage-y. Take a look at reference photos of hands or look at your own hands (or snap a photo of your hand in the right pose).
-The collar of the shirt/cape/whatever looks great on the right (nice volume) but flat and wrong on the left because all of the lines meet at the point where the line of the neck starts. Just do the same thing on the left as you did on the right and you're golden.
-The facial features look a bit wonky. Drawing a cross on the face will help you keep things symmetrical. The mouth is too close to the chin. Flipping the canvas will help you here too.
-Make sure you draw the whole skull and body before you add clothes, hair or facial features. This will help you get the anatomy right.
-Overall the body proportions look pretty good since you're going for an anime inspired style.

I drew a sketch to help you understand. You're already doing really well, just keep practising and you'll improve fast. Good luck!

Thanks for the advice!
Sorry it took so long for me to respond I had to wait for my new tablet pen to come in.
Heres a sketch I made using your advice
I'd appreciate any critique

[Lodratio]

Merry cirno day everyone!

[Periwinkle]

Need major colouring, shading, and lighting advice please

[Boyish]

4 years since I posted last.. Looooong time lurking, but at least my art got a bit better ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Maybe I'll actually start on a visual novel in the next 4 years

[EkanubaTheKittyCat]

Another character for my project. Click on image for better quality. Critique appericated.

[Tempus]

Art I made for Ladykiller in a Bind. The second one is the point of view of the camera in the first image.

[xKuroshiro]

Need critique and how should I price my art?

[Periwinkle]

Critique/feedback is very much appreciated!

[Yada]

I haven't done any fan art in a looong time - can anybody tell which character this is?

[EkanubaTheKittyCat]

Another sprite, more anime-like this time.

[Tempus]

Some more art I made for Ladykiller in a Bind:

[Rossfellow]

Ever have those things deep in your old gallery that you look at and go "Why did I even make this?"

I still have no answer to that.

http://orig04.deviantart.net/e1d8/f/201 ... 70fzd0.jpg

[LateWhiteRabbit]

Ever have those things deep in your old gallery that you look at and go "Why did I even make this?"

I still have no answer to that.

http://orig04.deviantart.net/e1d8/f/201 ... 70fzd0.jpg

All ... the ... time. Like, what kind of sleep-deprived, caffeine-addled, late night psychosis produced this? I think that's normal for artists though.