Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
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marinaknight: Um, I'm no artist but that leaves brush looks awful, a normal round brush would do a much better job than that one. Also, that trunk looks completely awesome
ps: is nobody going to comment on my title screen?
ps: is nobody going to comment on my title screen?
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In a thread as huge as this, some people tend to get overlooked sadly.Minnfae wrote:ps: is nobody going to comment on my title screen?
About the title screen, it's kind of dark. Dunno if that's the intention. Regardless of that, you might want to make at least the logo and buttons brighter. They blend too much in the background. They're buttons, they are supposed to be noticed!
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I agree =DMinnfae wrote:marinaknight: Um, I'm no artist but that leaves brush looks awful, a normal round brush would do a much better job than that one. Also, that trunk looks completely awesome
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I don't know about those leaves. The sudden detail out of nowhere makes it look copy-pasted or a leaf brush and clashes with the relatively simple trunk. It's definitely a recognizable tree, though.marineknight wrote:Btw I tried to draw another tree, I think it looks better this time =D
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Started doodling part of this while listeniong to some music...two hours later I got this. Opinions?
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I wanted to see if I could use mypaint to make anything I liked. Well, I don't hate the results, but I don't like the process. I probably won't do anything in this style again.
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Um... what is it?marineknight wrote:I'm planning to use this image in a forest scene of my VN, it was drawn using photoshop CS4.
Any constructive criticism would very much be appreciated. =D
Oh, okay, I followed the thread more. I honestly thought it was an abstract piece, maybe along the lines of a fractal.
Lumen_Astra, your work is nice, the lines are clean and colors bold. When you're just starting out, that's the important thing and style and mixing it up comes later.
Myapple, is there more information on the characters? I'm curious about them now.
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The brunette is named Auric, and the demon is Balon.BCS wrote: Myapple, is there more information on the characters? I'm curious about them now.
They're from a bxb VN that i'm currently planning. I have concepts for most of the characters done, but I didn't want to make a post in the works thread until I have the plot more... solidified XD
It takes place in a wintery land, with certain scenes told through flashback dream sequences.
I hope i'm not typing too much here @_@
Here are some of the background concepts i've done for it;
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Some random long haired guy I drew today in Homestuck style:
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You know you've been in Facebook too much when you try to find the "like" button and fail to find it xDWinKi wrote:Some random long haired guy I drew today in Homestuck style:
This is awesome
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Did a logo commission for shine!
Also drew something:
Also drew something:
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And now for something entirely different
Some of my visual novels are at http://www.the-new-lagoon.com. They are NSFW
Poorly done hand-drawn art is still poorly done art. Be a Poser (or better yet, use DAZ Studio 3D) - dare to be different.
Poorly done hand-drawn art is still poorly done art. Be a Poser (or better yet, use DAZ Studio 3D) - dare to be different.
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Love that blouse Fleet, shadows and creases work really well..and I love the framing and light direction of the whole shot too.
Bit worried about the plates as they look too big for shelves and sink into wood.
Bit worried about the plates as they look too big for shelves and sink into wood.
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Compared to a lot of your earlier stuff, that's pretty good. A bit more polish and it should look great.fleet wrote:And now for something entirely different
I second this.kkffoo wrote:Bit worried about the plates as they look too big for shelves and sink into wood.
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