Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

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#1516 Post by DaFool » Sun Jun 01, 2008 10:46 am

Thanks for sharing, Ocean's Dream.

magi >> awesome, you have a way of drawing solid, bullet-proof girls. Looks like she can stop a tank. It's a cool style that fits any heavy physics-based concepts.

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#1517 Post by Sakurazaki » Sun Jun 01, 2008 9:38 pm

Working on my tablet work and coloring :D Starting to get the hang of it. I love my eyes >w<....I didn't draw this, just practicing my CG skills on this. ARM PROPORTION IS BOTHERSOME D:
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#1518 Post by magi » Sun Jun 01, 2008 11:15 pm

Cute, but watch out for the length of that right arm of hers.

Edit: Also, thanks guys, for the comment on Rococo. :3

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#1519 Post by LVUER » Sun Jun 01, 2008 11:21 pm

Sakurazaki wrote:I love my eyes >w<....
Me too ^_^ The eyes are so good that they look like out of place.
magi wrote:Cute, but watch out for the length of that right arm of hers.
Agree. The arms length seems off.

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#1520 Post by Sakurazaki » Mon Jun 02, 2008 1:16 am

Yeah...>.> still working on that, working with a tablet still is tricky, otherwise if I did it on paper it'd be a lot nicer...and a lot more proportionate.

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#1521 Post by Sapphire Dragon » Mon Jun 02, 2008 7:26 am

Ren, that watercolour is awesome, would look great on my wall.

And I cant really spend the time to fully comment on the others soooo; I love your pixel art ocean, maybe you should try a homebrew ds game or something, it would fit nicely. Magis Racoco drawing is nicely coloured. The only thing id say is that the front of the skirt is coloured a little flatly so the breases in the material dont show well.

Sakurazaki that face is really nice. Ill be looking forward to when you redo the arm because you should, its injustice to her if you leave it and its clearly obvious you have plenty of skill to do so.
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#1522 Post by Sakurazaki » Mon Jun 02, 2008 1:31 pm

Maybe I should hack it off? >.>' *Sakurazaki does not like doing arms/hands if you can tell*
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#1523 Post by Cybeat » Mon Jun 02, 2008 1:36 pm

Looks like Nagi from Peace@Pieces.
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#1524 Post by Sakurazaki » Mon Jun 02, 2008 3:39 pm

That's because it is. XD I decided to change the hair color and whatnot in tribute to a friend who recently broke her leg. Nozoi Ito is one of my fav artists.
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#1525 Post by Cybeat » Mon Jun 02, 2008 4:10 pm

Nagi's my favorite character in the game. Same here, Ito Noizi is my favorite artist, too. I would really like to see her draw, in action.
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#1526 Post by Doomfest » Mon Jun 02, 2008 5:02 pm

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#1527 Post by Ocean's Dream » Mon Jun 02, 2008 9:30 pm

Thanks guys! Sorry for not replying earlier, I forget what this site is called when I'm not at home.

@Sakurazaki: I hope I spelled that right! I think for the coloring of it, you could try using more contrast in your colors. The skin color I feel could also stand to be a bit less yellow, probably by changing the shadow color a bit.

@Doomfest: Sweet lineart! I dunno why, but it kinda seems like the girl to the left of the DE girl has a fur on her head or something. I'm not sure what about the hair makes it look like that, could be the hair that rests on the uniform or something.
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#1528 Post by Sakurazaki » Mon Jun 02, 2008 9:58 pm

I will keep that in mind. Although as I stated somewhere else. My screen is really really really bright, no matter how much I adjust it, so the colors usually seem odd to other people when they view it.
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#1529 Post by lordcloudx » Tue Jun 03, 2008 2:48 am

Sakurazaki: I love her eyes and that pose.
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#1530 Post by renkenjutsu » Tue Jun 03, 2008 8:34 am

I finally have the time to post something in this place, so after a long absence, here's a fan art I made. Nanase Matsuura from Macross Frontier:

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