Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#4456 Post by Minnfae » Wed Aug 29, 2012 1:44 pm

marinaknight: Um, I'm no artist but that leaves brush looks awful, a normal round brush would do a much better job than that one. Also, that trunk looks completely awesome

ps: is nobody going to comment on my title screen? :cry:
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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#4457 Post by Arelune » Wed Aug 29, 2012 1:53 pm

Minnfae wrote:ps: is nobody going to comment on my title screen? :cry:
In a thread as huge as this, some people tend to get overlooked sadly.

About the title screen, it's kind of dark. Dunno if that's the intention. Regardless of that, you might want to make at least the logo and buttons brighter. They blend too much in the background. They're buttons, they are supposed to be noticed!

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#4458 Post by marineknight » Wed Aug 29, 2012 2:05 pm

Minnfae wrote:marinaknight: Um, I'm no artist but that leaves brush looks awful, a normal round brush would do a much better job than that one. Also, that trunk looks completely awesome
I agree =D
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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#4459 Post by Explosions&NickCage » Wed Aug 29, 2012 2:52 pm

marineknight wrote:Btw I tried to draw another tree, I think it looks better this time =D
I don't know about those leaves. The sudden detail out of nowhere makes it look copy-pasted or a leaf brush and clashes with the relatively simple trunk. It's definitely a recognizable tree, though.

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#4460 Post by Hijiri » Wed Aug 29, 2012 5:21 pm

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Started doodling part of this while listeniong to some music...two hours later I got this. Opinions?
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#4461 Post by Sharm » Wed Aug 29, 2012 5:34 pm

I wanted to see if I could use mypaint to make anything I liked. Well, I don't hate the results, but I don't like the process. I probably won't do anything in this style again.
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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#4462 Post by Watercolorheart » Thu Aug 30, 2012 2:55 am

marineknight wrote:I'm planning to use this image in a forest scene of my VN, it was drawn using photoshop CS4.

Any constructive criticism would very much be appreciated. =D
Um... what is it?

Oh, okay, I followed the thread more. I honestly thought it was an abstract piece, maybe along the lines of a fractal.

Lumen_Astra, your work is nice, the lines are clean and colors bold. When you're just starting out, that's the important thing and style and mixing it up comes later.

Myapple, is there more information on the characters? I'm curious about them now.
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#4463 Post by myapple » Thu Aug 30, 2012 8:24 am

BCS wrote: Myapple, is there more information on the characters? I'm curious about them now.
The brunette is named Auric, and the demon is Balon.
They're from a bxb VN that i'm currently planning. I have concepts for most of the characters done, but I didn't want to make a post in the works thread until I have the plot more... solidified XD
It takes place in a wintery land, with certain scenes told through flashback dream sequences.
I hope i'm not typing too much here @_@

Here are some of the background concepts i've done for it;
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#4464 Post by WinKi » Thu Aug 30, 2012 9:29 am

Some random long haired guy I drew today in Homestuck style: :mrgreen:

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#4465 Post by Deji » Thu Aug 30, 2012 10:09 am

WinKi wrote:Some random long haired guy I drew today in Homestuck style: :mrgreen:

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#4466 Post by Coren » Thu Aug 30, 2012 10:34 am

Did a logo commission for shine!
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Also drew something:
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#4467 Post by Pyonkotchi » Thu Aug 30, 2012 10:36 am

i accidentally more twewy fanart
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#4468 Post by fleet » Thu Aug 30, 2012 11:28 am

And now for something entirely different
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#4469 Post by kkffoo » Thu Aug 30, 2012 12:21 pm

Love that blouse Fleet, shadows and creases work really well..and I love the framing and light direction of the whole shot too.
Bit worried about the plates as they look too big for shelves and sink into wood.

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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#4470 Post by Hijiri » Thu Aug 30, 2012 2:22 pm

fleet wrote:And now for something entirely different
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Compared to a lot of your earlier stuff, that's pretty good. A bit more polish and it should look great.
kkffoo wrote:Bit worried about the plates as they look too big for shelves and sink into wood.
I second this.
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