Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#4471 Post by Geckos » Thu Aug 30, 2012 2:45 pm

Minnfae wrote: Here's the title screen for my current project, dunno if it even counts as something to post here since I just mixed public domain images and added text, bu anyway, I'd love some critique
I really like the composition and over-all idea. I feel that it's a little bit too dark/grayscale, though. I've done a quick paint over to brighten it up and make the stars more apparent. Hope this is of some help!
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#4472 Post by fleet » Thu Aug 30, 2012 9:58 pm

kkffoo wrote:Love that blouse Fleet, shadows and creases work really well..and I love the framing and light direction of the whole shot too.
Bit worried about the plates as they look too big for shelves and sink into wood.
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Thanks for the feedback and specific advice. I'll fix the size and position of the plates.
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#4473 Post by AshenhartKrie » Thu Aug 30, 2012 10:43 pm

All the art's run out for me to comment on. V_V oh well, I'll just upload something new.
This guy's just a one off, he might appear in a story or something at a later point in time. I drew this entirely on my laptop, which is why the lines are a bit shoddy. I know someone suggested not to use dodge and burn while still a rookie, but I find it the easiest way to do the hair and the eyes. (sorry i forget who told me that).
This is Carther, the self proclaimed prince of the desert. And i don't even know why it's the Self Proclaimed. He just wanted to be called that lol. Opinions anyone?
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#4474 Post by Alera » Sat Sep 01, 2012 8:10 am

It's been awhile since I last posted here...

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#4475 Post by Geckos » Sat Sep 01, 2012 10:30 am

Alera wrote:It's been awhile since I last posted here...

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The colors and stylization are very cute. The only thing I'd suggest, is to use a different background pattern (it looks like a screen cap of the generic photoshop bg that is checkered, with some color over it.) I could be wrong, and it could just be some checkers! But I think even a variation in size/shape would help a lot. Nice use of gradients! :3
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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#4476 Post by Alera » Sat Sep 01, 2012 10:46 am

Geckos wrote:
The colors and stylization are very cute. The only thing I'd suggest, is to use a different background pattern (it looks like a screen cap of the generic photoshop bg that is checkered, with some color over it.) I could be wrong, and it could just be some checkers! But I think even a variation in size/shape would help a lot. Nice use of gradients! :3
Thank you~

And that background was really random. XD And yes, you are wrong, this pattern is quite bigger than the PS bg one, I know, because I sometimes do use it-LOL XD I just like checkers for bgs, no matter how big or small they are ~<3
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#4477 Post by Mink » Sat Sep 01, 2012 7:33 pm

I'm trying to learn Construct 2 so I can make a side-scroller based on The Buried Moon. I also spent more time on this than I originally meant to.
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#4478 Post by Minnfae » Sat Sep 01, 2012 11:10 pm

Geckos wrote:I really like the composition and over-all idea. I feel that it's a little bit too dark/grayscale, though. I've done a quick paint over to brighten it up and make the stars more apparent. Hope this is of some help!
Thanks!
I'll probably remake it (because I changed the entire game idea), but keep it similar to that one, with that glittery 'frame' around the main picture :P

>Mink: I like your style for the character, but I feel that the pose should be a bit more dynamic? I mean, it looks like there's some fighting going on

>AshenhartKrie: I'm not convinced by the shading (hair and hat specially) or the shape of that ear :/ I really like his eye, his expression and color scheme though



Here's a design for a main character of the completely changed Cosmic Voices. I'll add more detail, specially to her hair and to her clothes (she needs earrings and that hat is looking kind of boring right now), and but I'd love some opinions. She's about 22 years old.
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#4479 Post by Hijiri » Sun Sep 02, 2012 12:27 am

Decided to mess around a bit with Abraham's design a bit today:
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This one has a more "journalist" vibe than his other designs for some reason :/ Should also fix the eyes a bit >>;
(Then again, I did get the idea for the outfit from one of my family members, who happens to be a journalist as well)
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#4480 Post by oza » Sun Sep 02, 2012 1:46 am

Character for my vn :3

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#4481 Post by Lumen_Astrum » Sun Sep 02, 2012 2:03 am

My cartoons fail.

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My Journalism homework. I liked the style, but it looks like semi-manga so I'm still modifying stuff in it. After several anatomy practice, even thought the poses looks simple, it's okay, I guess TuT

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#4482 Post by Mink » Sun Sep 02, 2012 3:03 am

I'm now in love with Bastion. <3 So I attempted to draw The Kid (who I'm pretty sure isn't really a kid, but is just a kid in comparison to someone else)
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#4483 Post by Watercolorheart » Sun Sep 02, 2012 4:36 pm

I was drawing my monstergirl character Neonata today, it's such a bland generic pose though. Her proportions are deliberately off.
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Hijiri: The elbow crease is a little high, it should be aligned with the midsection. The hand is also somewhat large, and the character is faintly cross-eyed. Hopefully when you "ink" it these will also be fairly minor and easy fixes for you.

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#4484 Post by Maltagliati » Mon Sep 03, 2012 12:49 am

/ le single tear /
I was warming up for some drawing but I got way ahead of myself. I ended up drawing a cast of characters that I originally planned out for another VN a year ago.
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#4485 Post by Razz » Mon Sep 03, 2012 1:32 am

Maltagliati wrote:/ le single tear /
I was warming up for some drawing but I got way ahead of myself. I ended up drawing a cast of characters that I originally planned out for another VN a year ago.
That picture is effing awesome. ;w; You make me want to draw a cast shot now.
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