Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#5491 Post by LVUER » Mon Jun 03, 2013 6:55 pm

azureXtwilight wrote:Asplosion!
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You draw this, Azure? This is awesome! Definitely huge improvement over your old drawing.
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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#5492 Post by tiya_nofurita » Mon Jun 03, 2013 7:57 pm

Ultimate Ego wrote:Um, hello! I suppose this isn't really the place for an introductory post, but I hope you will forgive my making it something of one.

I'm rather new to Visual Novels, but so far I find them really fascinating. I'd love to make one some day, but my skill is not up to par yet, I think. Which brings me to why I posted in this thread.

I enjoy making art, though I'm not very good. About a month or so ago I was working on an idea for a VN, and made some practice sprites. I posted them to a EVN community for feedback, but they were thought I was a troll because my art was so poor. I know that you shouldn't get too attached to your work, but the criticism stung a bit, and I gave up on making a VN for at least the next couple years. Even so, I still intend to practice in the meantime!

With all that said, here's some of my stuff. I hope that it isn't too offensive to your eyes!
What are you talking about ? This is not poor at all >.< you have a decent skill and artwork here
LVUER wrote: You draw this, Azure? This is awesome! Definitely huge improvement over your old drawing.
I agree with you. She is definitely improving so fast >.<
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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#5493 Post by eingelle » Mon Jun 03, 2013 8:23 pm

Ultimate Ego wrote:Um, hello! I suppose this isn't really the place for an introductory post, but I hope you will forgive my making it something of one.

I'm rather new to Visual Novels, but so far I find them really fascinating. I'd love to make one some day, but my skill is not up to par yet, I think. Which brings me to why I posted in this thread.

I enjoy making art, though I'm not very good. About a month or so ago I was working on an idea for a VN, and made some practice sprites. I posted them to a EVN community for feedback, but they were thought I was a troll because my art was so poor. I know that you shouldn't get too attached to your work, but the criticism stung a bit, and I gave up on making a VN for at least the next couple years. Even so, I still intend to practice in the meantime!

With all that said, here's some of my stuff. I hope that it isn't too offensive to your eyes!
Welcome to LSF! I'm also quite new to VNs and I'm currently working on my first right now! O u Ov
I say your artwork looks fine to me! Although not professional, I still believe it's workable and acceptable if this is for your first free VN game.
Your art skills will improve in time if what you say about practicing is true, I assure you. Your characters also have it's own art style. Like a mixture of cartoon and realistic anime, that makes your work unique. Some people like this kind of style!
So, Ultimate Ego, keep on going! Don't give up! Try looking for novice programmers and writers that are willing to help you and each other out. You can improve together! :D

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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#5494 Post by Hijiri » Tue Jun 04, 2013 5:19 pm

Finally finished this:
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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#5495 Post by Pyonkotchi » Tue Jun 04, 2013 6:47 pm

some dumb ocs,,,,,,,,,
art,,,, more like FART
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#5496 Post by Tempus » Tue Jun 04, 2013 9:26 pm

Pyonkotchi wrote:more like FART
Cracked me up.

I think they look nice. Will they be just as happy looking holding the sword and hacking people with it? :D Or is that too morbid of me...
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#5497 Post by khnachi » Tue Jun 04, 2013 9:39 pm

Pyonkotchi wrote:some dumb ocs,,,,,,,,,
art,,,, more like FART
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oh,my..those are adorable~! :mrgreen:

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#5498 Post by Ant-san » Wed Jun 05, 2013 10:38 am

Ant-san wrote:Finally got my pen pressure to work on my mother's laptop T^T
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So... tested it... pressure's somewhat crazily sensitive... but it's better than nothing ^^"
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#5499 Post by TheGuraGuraMan » Wed Jun 05, 2013 11:19 am

A little drawing request made yesterday :
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#5500 Post by JumpJump » Wed Jun 05, 2013 10:34 pm

Just came back from holiday and I found that my creative spark has gone weak with the down time. So, here is a work in progress to get me started.
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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#5501 Post by azureXtwilight » Thu Jun 06, 2013 3:14 am

LVUER wrote:
azureXtwilight wrote:Asplosion!
miladyshuang.jpg
You draw this, Azure? This is awesome! Definitely huge improvement over your old drawing.
I did, I guess the old feedback for doppelgangers made me train better out of spite. Thanks XD
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#5502 Post by FailedSanity » Thu Jun 06, 2013 5:51 am

Pyonkotchi:
Your OC's are adorable! Magical girls, right?

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I've been working on some OCs of my own (she's for an RP group).
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#5503 Post by TheGuraGuraMan » Thu Jun 06, 2013 2:49 pm

Another drawing I made today, I have to admit I'm quite proud of the result, especially for the right arm~
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#5504 Post by Geckos » Fri Jun 07, 2013 1:38 am

Some fanart for the draw-other-peoples-stuff thread! MIYU TAKANAWA from Memories of Summer Winds.
That's right. I'm takin' yo' characters and giving them features! /shot/
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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#5505 Post by azureXtwilight » Fri Jun 07, 2013 11:56 am

I'm not going to use it in any game, so dumping!
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