Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#5506 Post by Deji » Fri Jun 07, 2013 3:08 pm

Last night, I was teaching my students (more like "see this? now do it yourself. GO!") how to make mock-ups for their game project(s).
So while they worked with pen an paper and/or photoshop/sai, I made my own mock-up :')
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This... may be used at a later date for something... yup...
Also I hate myself because I'm still behind with AJ CGs and that's the only thing preventing it from being released in public :'D
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#5507 Post by JumpJump » Fri Jun 07, 2013 7:11 pm

Just a little update.
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Next time I show this will be in my drawing thread, completed. Going slowly with this one as I'm getting distracted with a searing pain in my mouth (dentist had a tough time removing the tooth as it had fused with my jaw.)

I changed the position of his eyes. It was a bit off for me before.
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#5508 Post by Endorphin » Fri Jun 07, 2013 8:45 pm

Azure
Wow, hun, you're really getting better!
Please keep up the good work, it looks great. :>

Deji
This looks sooo adorable!
Students? :< (Now I'm curious.)
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Still playing around with the drawing style for 1plus3 to get used to it.
(I also changed the lineart.)
Since such a cooking scene is typical for Fortune and Mendel, I might make this into an CG one day.
And they still wonder why nobody ever comes for dinner.
But now back to plotting. x_X

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#5509 Post by 100puro » Sat Jun 08, 2013 6:48 pm

@Deji: Nice design! And I haven't seen you around here very much lately (maybe i've just missed you?) but what's this about students I hear? :O
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Anyways I've been working a lot lately on the visual novel teams I'm a part of and I'm not sure I can post that up before those games are released so I'll just post up something I drew up randomly while I was playing with colors...
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#5510 Post by latte » Sat Jun 08, 2013 7:10 pm

@Geckos Pro Miyu is pro ; __ ; she looks gorgeous, thank you very much!

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#5511 Post by Tempus » Sat Jun 08, 2013 7:41 pm

Endorphin wrote:Since such a cooking scene is typical for Fortune and Mendel, I might make this into an CG one day.
That looks really nice, especially with the perspective looking up at their faces.
latte wrote:Skies of some paintings I did recently
Uh, isn't that backwards? :D Regardless, the skies look sweet.

Also, yay for chocobos ^.^
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#5512 Post by LVUER » Sat Jun 08, 2013 9:54 pm

Deji wrote:Last night, I was teaching my students (more like "see this? now do it yourself. GO!") how to make mock-ups for their game project(s).
So while they worked with pen an paper and/or photoshop/sai, I made my own mock-up :')
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This... may be used at a later date for something... yup...
Also I hate myself because I'm still behind with AJ CGs and that's the only thing preventing it from being released in public :'D
You're going to make this game?
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#5513 Post by azureXtwilight » Sat Jun 08, 2013 11:21 pm

Endorphin wrote:Azure
Wow, hun, you're really getting better!
Please keep up the good work, it looks great. :>

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Still playing around with the drawing style for 1plus3 to get used to it.
(I also changed the lineart.)
Since such a cooking scene is typical for Fortune and Mendel, I might make this into an CG one day.
And they still wonder why nobody ever comes for dinner.
But now back to plotting. x_X

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Thank you, Ma'am! I'll try my best to improve even more!

I really love the dark feel you put into your drawing, keep up the good work!
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#5514 Post by Geckos » Sat Jun 08, 2013 11:28 pm

@Endorphin
Nice use of colors paired with the odd perspective. They work together well.

@latte
Lovely colors! They do look like fun once you get the hang of 'em.
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#5515 Post by Auro-Cyanide » Sun Jun 09, 2013 9:05 am

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Testing out some different colouring styles. I would be happy to hear people's opinions \(^u^)/

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#5516 Post by azureXtwilight » Sun Jun 09, 2013 9:10 am

I personally love the second one best, all those details ^^
However the other coloring styles look very good too, especially the third one.
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#5517 Post by Riku » Sun Jun 09, 2013 9:34 am

latte wrote:@Geckos

Skies of some paintings I did recently:
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It's really gorgeous! I'd like to see how you've done it. Maybe you can try speed painting next time!

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#5518 Post by Riku » Sun Jun 09, 2013 9:38 am

Auro-Cyanide wrote:
[img]http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/download/file.php?id=20767&t=1[/img]Untitled-1.jpg
Testing out some different colouring styles. I would be happy to hear people's opinions \(^u^)/
I prefer the third one! :mrgreen:

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#5519 Post by Endorphin » Sun Jun 09, 2013 12:41 pm

Nawwww, thank you all. Glad that you like it. :>

Auro
I like the second one. :>
Though the skin colour's kind of dull, so a bit more colour (overlays, yay /shot) might make it more interesting.
Good work, hun!
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#5520 Post by Geckos » Sun Jun 09, 2013 1:40 pm

@Auro
1: Nice, but doesn't do your skills at shading justice.
2: Feels a bit muddy in the face and white shirt region; putting red in the shadows there just makes it look sloppy as opposed to the light bouncing around.
3: The colors in this are very nice. The skin really pops, and his hair looks much nicer with a warm light brown highlighting it instead of a cool one. The white shirt looks very nice; the hood's shading looks a little lazy compared to 2's shading. The backlight works very well here, since it's a sort of blueish/greenish feeling color that contrasts his skin well.
4: Soft shading also doesn't do your shading skills justice. Maybe if there were some harder edges in there.
5: Good colors. The hair isn't as nice as it is in other styles.
6: Is that a slight gradient over him? it's nice but looks quite flat and one again doesn't do your shading justice.
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