Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#5851 Post by JumpJump » Sun Sep 01, 2013 3:09 pm

Rinima wrote:
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Rinima wrote:Someone mind telling me where I went wrong with this ;A;

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WHAT HAVE I CREATED?
From what I can see, the arms are to long. The elbow should be at breast hight. For the pose and angle the breasts should not be visible. All you should see of the arms is elbow to wrist. I think that the legs may be to long....
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I though it might have been the arms and torso.

p.s. Your profile picture is oddly appropriate...


It's from Seeds of anxiety Vol.1. The artist is Masaaki Nakamura. Real unsettling horror, I really recommend it.
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#5852 Post by Kami » Sun Sep 01, 2013 3:29 pm

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#5853 Post by chocojax » Sun Sep 01, 2013 5:40 pm

JumpJump wrote:
Rinima wrote:Thank you
I though it might have been the arms and torso.

p.s. Your profile picture is oddly appropriate...
It's from Seeds of anxiety Vol.1. The artist is Masaaki Nakamura. Real unsettling horror, I really recommend it.
I always thought it was
the guy's face when he opened his eyes, because he was so sleepy.
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#5854 Post by Arcanum » Sun Sep 01, 2013 7:28 pm

I've been drawing some sprites for the Voltage Inc. contest, but I think I'll run out of time =( I'm glad they allowed showing off your artwork on other sites, though o/

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#5855 Post by Hijiri » Mon Sep 02, 2013 12:04 am

More random sketche V:
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#5856 Post by Ekamu » Mon Sep 02, 2013 3:08 am

off topic comment: Nice I love horror manga, I read Seeds of anxiety after I'm done with Uzumaki.
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#5857 Post by Exaelia » Mon Sep 02, 2013 11:40 am

Ekamu wrote:@ Exaelia: Cute,the style is sort of similar to the one in Adventure Time (^_^)


what do you think of the color...how can I improve?
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also I lifted the shorts in the line-art...I think it looks right now.
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#5858 Post by MomoiroGirl » Mon Sep 02, 2013 1:59 pm

Wow, I'm so late to reply! DX
So many replies @__@

@Ekamu: the creative blockage was more reffering to me not being able to come up with new characters atm, so I've been drawing "people i know irl", only manga-fied XD Well, they're not supposed to look frightened, more like "surprised" >__> Maybe the word "excited" fits what I was going for a bit more. Something á la these pictures
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@Didules: Yea, my "happy expressions" somehow always look a bit off '''' Well, rather than surprised, I'd rather say that I was going for "excited", but I must have failed anyway, since people say that it does look creepy XD Oh well, try, try again ^^''

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#5859 Post by chocojax » Mon Sep 02, 2013 4:45 pm

@Momoiro Girl:
Not sure if you heard this or not, but comparing your drawing to those references, I think the main reason why they looked so surprised was because there was such a huge gap between the top lid and the pupil. There's very little gap for Rapunzel's, even in the one where she's falling with her hair (It's just enough of a gap to show that she's looking down).
(Sorry about raising the contrast, I was trying to make it easier to move the eyelids down without making it obvious, haha.)
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#5860 Post by MomoiroGirl » Wed Sep 04, 2013 4:09 pm

chocojax wrote:@Momoiro Girl:
Not sure if you heard this or not, but comparing your drawing to those references, I think the main reason why they looked so surprised was because there was such a huge gap between the top lid and the pupil. There's very little gap for Rapunzel's, even in the one where she's falling with her hair (It's just enough of a gap to show that she's looking down).
(Sorry about raising the contrast, I was trying to make it easier to move the eyelids down without making it obvious, haha.)
Oh yea, I totally see that! I feel like I'm getting worse at drawing manga eyes every time I try, I can't even tell what exactly is wrong hahahah XD I at least hope that it was as simple as just lowering the top eyelid ._.

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#5861 Post by azureXtwilight » Thu Sep 05, 2013 10:46 am

I still need to practice hands owo
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#5862 Post by Ekamu » Fri Sep 06, 2013 11:34 am

I still need to practice hands owo
same here man...same here (-_-)
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#5863 Post by Applegate » Fri Sep 06, 2013 3:22 pm

Hands are difficult, so forgive me, I hid them away this time.
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#5864 Post by Hijiri » Fri Sep 06, 2013 6:34 pm

More lameo drawing from me :V
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#5865 Post by MaiMai » Fri Sep 06, 2013 10:37 pm

Trying to practice what I preach and push myself to do something that I usually avoid. That being, BACKGROUNDS.

Oddly enough, I've been able to jump this hurdle and CG a semi-decent BG with characters in it, wow. Next, I'm gonna try a scene taking place in an interior! It's not done yet of course, but I'm getting there. I'm just glad I found a technique for tree trunks I feel comfortable with. (Feel free to crit the BG esp. it's been a long time since I managed something on this scale and I plan to do more in the future.)
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