Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

Questions, skill improvement, and respectful critique involving art assets.
Message
Author
HeapCleaner
Newbie
Posts: 5
Joined: Fri Dec 09, 2005 8:19 am
Location: Java
Contact:

#91 Post by HeapCleaner » Mon Dec 12, 2005 3:32 am

a character sketch for my game... i don't have a story yet but maybe by drawing some sketches i can come up with one :wink:

Image

[/img]

User avatar
monele
Lemma-Class Veteran
Posts: 4101
Joined: Sat Oct 08, 2005 7:57 am
Location: France
Contact:

#92 Post by monele » Mon Dec 12, 2005 8:21 am

Glblb, that's awesome :shock: ! (not very constructive, I admit, but ... really, it's good!)

User avatar
rioka
Royal Manga Tutor
Posts: 1255
Joined: Fri Jul 16, 2004 12:21 pm
Completed: Amgine Park, Garden Society: Kykuit, Metropolitan Blues (art)
Location: somewhere in NY
Contact:

#93 Post by rioka » Mon Dec 12, 2005 11:27 am

Nice one, HeapCleaner! lol Yeah, sketching can help generate a story sometimes... :D (though I have yet to do just that... ^_^;;)

Anyways, you should fix that thumb (or shorten her fingers). (I figure you'd know which one I'm talking about) ^^

User avatar
Glasskitten
Regular
Posts: 138
Joined: Fri Jul 22, 2005 6:19 pm
Completed: I confess to nothing! \(>o<)/
Location: Inside a parcel of air
Contact:

#94 Post by Glasskitten » Mon Dec 12, 2005 11:40 am

Regarding HeapCleaner's drawing, I am afraid I cannot be more constructive than to say I am extremely impressed. I hope you do end up making a game from your sketches. =^_^=
Grand list of things not officially canceled:
Salt -- the heartwarming story of brain-eating space worms
Tangent -- an epic poem and/or novel about a borderline-autistic Martian imp and her relationship with God
Kittens of the Darned -- a grimdark soap opera about sexy catgirls (Indefinitely postponed until I learn to draw and color realistically)
The Other Mary -- the most perfect fic about the most perfect Mary Sue EVER
Rockheart -- a short story about a monster who kills everyone
Corrupted -- a completely different short story about a monster who kills everyone (late Worst Visual Novel Ever)
Checkpoint 36a -- the transcription of a short multi-ending dream about time travel and undead schoolgirls
In Which the Princess is Kidnapped -- an entry in the "ordinary girl ends up in an alien universe and tries to save it" genre
Pictogram Scramble: Magical Friendship Bunny Ivy -- a Flash game about a magical girl making friends (Indefinitely postponed until I learn how friendship works)

HeapCleaner
Newbie
Posts: 5
Joined: Fri Dec 09, 2005 8:19 am
Location: Java
Contact:

#95 Post by HeapCleaner » Mon Dec 12, 2005 9:28 pm

@eclipse : thanks for the suggestion, and i will surely fix it :)
@monele & glasskitten : thanks for the compliment, i'll try very hard to finish my VN game

there are some more sketches, i hope you like them too :

Image

Image

Image
[/img]

User avatar
Quin
Regular
Posts: 117
Joined: Sun Nov 20, 2005 4:29 am
Location: Maine
Contact:

#96 Post by Quin » Tue Dec 13, 2005 3:57 am

I've already told you this in private conversation, HeapCleaner, but I just want to make public that I absolutely love these drawings. I won't give the full art-school critique (oh, those good old days o_o;), but I just have to say the quality of line in these sketches is fantastic. I hope that if you ever do decide to go beyond the sketch stage into inking/coloring the characters, you don't lose any of the energy and expressiveness captured in the pencil versions.

bookie
Veteran
Posts: 269
Joined: Fri Mar 25, 2005 10:17 pm
Contact:

#97 Post by bookie » Wed Dec 14, 2005 6:13 pm

Wow, very nice. (is that a ghost on the computor screen or just the other side of the paper? XD)

User avatar
Iaman
Regular
Posts: 62
Joined: Mon Oct 25, 2004 5:35 pm
Location: in my body
Contact:

#98 Post by Iaman » Thu Dec 15, 2005 10:07 pm

Well, I haven't posted anything in a while... but I do have a webcomic going now! Anyone who's interested(although, it's fairly inside-joke filled right now... the latest is poking fun at Golden Axe(old video game) though) it's here:
http://takestheirpantsoff.comicgenesis.com/

Also, here's a quick(read, couple minutes tops) sketch I did a couple days ago:
Attachments
robotconcept1.png
RAWR!!!
(115.45 KiB) Downloaded 79 times
I have no pants!

Ren

#99 Post by Ren » Thu Dec 15, 2005 11:24 pm

Aaah, Golden Axe>_<
That game taught me my very first English words(Princess and Prince...then Potion, wich i pronounced Poh-tee-ohn at the time, XD)
The nostalgic feelings;_;*huggs the Megadrive*

musical74
Eileen-Class Veteran
Posts: 1021
Joined: Sat Dec 18, 2004 6:13 pm
Location: Oregon
Contact:

#100 Post by musical74 » Sun Dec 18, 2005 11:03 pm

HeapCleaner: those are very well done! =)

Iaman: Ah, Golden Axe....I remember playing that in the arcades (does this tell you all how old I am?)
A friend is one that walks in when the world walks out.

User avatar
F.I.A
Miko-Class Veteran
Posts: 546
Joined: Wed Sep 21, 2005 10:49 pm
Projects: Winter Shard, EVE, Hyperion
Contact:

#101 Post by F.I.A » Tue Dec 27, 2005 11:57 pm

What can I say? I love mechs.

Dekabot, or it is just a plain desk

User avatar
monele
Lemma-Class Veteran
Posts: 4101
Joined: Sat Oct 08, 2005 7:57 am
Location: France
Contact:

#102 Post by monele » Wed Dec 28, 2005 7:22 am

Eheh, crazy stuff XD. What kind of weapon does it have ? :)

User avatar
lordcloudx
Eileen-Class Veteran
Posts: 1406
Joined: Fri Feb 17, 2006 12:47 pm
Completed: http://rd2k2-games.blogspot.com

it's ani-me!

#103 Post by lordcloudx » Fri Feb 17, 2006 2:05 pm

Shameless self-indulgence time: I call this one ani-me!
I'm betting no one can guess my correct age on the first try by looking at this pic.

Image
How do you make your games? I see. Thank you for the prompt replies, but it is my considered opinion that you're doing it wrong inefficiently because I am a perfushenal professional. Do it my way this way and we can all ascend VN Nirvana together while allowing me to stroke my ego you will improve much faster. Also, please don't forget to thank me for this constructive critique or I will cry and bore you to death respond appropriately with a tl;dr rant discourse of epic adequately lengthy proportions. - Sarcasm Veiled in Euphemism: Secrets of Forum Civility by lordcloudx (Coming soon to an online ebook near you.)

User avatar
Akimaru
Regular
Posts: 39
Joined: Tue Jan 17, 2006 3:47 pm
Contact:

#104 Post by Akimaru » Sat Feb 18, 2006 4:28 am

kamusta!
uhmm...i'm guessing you're around 25 or younger

User avatar
lordcloudx
Eileen-Class Veteran
Posts: 1406
Joined: Fri Feb 17, 2006 12:47 pm
Completed: http://rd2k2-games.blogspot.com

#105 Post by lordcloudx » Sat Feb 18, 2006 10:08 am

Oh. Pinoy ka?

ei you're pretty close. Darn! I was hoping someone would say 16 or 18.
25 or younger is right. I'm 22
How do you make your games? I see. Thank you for the prompt replies, but it is my considered opinion that you're doing it wrong inefficiently because I am a perfushenal professional. Do it my way this way and we can all ascend VN Nirvana together while allowing me to stroke my ego you will improve much faster. Also, please don't forget to thank me for this constructive critique or I will cry and bore you to death respond appropriately with a tl;dr rant discourse of epic adequately lengthy proportions. - Sarcasm Veiled in Euphemism: Secrets of Forum Civility by lordcloudx (Coming soon to an online ebook near you.)

Post Reply

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users