Are you guys willing to give some criticism?

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Are you guys willing to give some criticism?

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I'm experimenting with 3d. Using Blender I made a chibi character I'm still doing research into rendering and the freestyle tool. I'm not satisfied with this render but decided to put it out there for your opinion on 3d chibi's

Also she doesn't have a face yet, I plan on drawing it on by hand and swapping it out using blender.
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For a chibi, her hips are toohigh and her torso too elongated (ie: shes too tall)
Otherwise, its a decent start.
A typical chibi is 1.5 - 2 times head height and the head should be 1.2 - 1.5 times as wide as the shoulders.

Hope this is helpful.
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Re: Are you guys willing to give some criticism?

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Imperf3kt wrote:For a chibi, her hips are toohigh and her torso too elongated (ie: shes too tall)
Otherwise, its a decent start.
A typical chibi is 1.5 - 2 times head height and the head should be 1.2 - 1.5 times as wide as the shoulders.

Hope this is helpful.

Thanks and yes it does.

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